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Postby HayesAJones » Sun May 20, 2012 4:50 pm

Fun fact: I REALLY didn't wanna do the introduction around me, but there wasn't anyone who I felt okay with using as a main character that already didn't star in a story here or who I didn't already have plans for. So... yeah.

Not a lot going on in the first chapter but... well, me, but things will pick up, I promise. Just wait 'til we get to the action.
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby Kiryu2012 » Sun May 20, 2012 4:53 pm

This is interesting. Things are gonna heat up, I just know it. Soon, we'll be going around, fighting demons Kingdom Hearts style, and a certain someone's gonna end up saving the day by the power of sandvich.


Nah, I kid. But seriously, this will get cool. I just know it.
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby MothraRocks » Sun May 20, 2012 4:57 pm

Pretty awesome start, like the idea of the screen "oozing" black. Nice end to the chapter as well.
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Postby GodzillavsZilla » Sun May 20, 2012 5:19 pm

The first chapter was good, I like the details, like ooze
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Postby King Caesar » Sun May 20, 2012 6:25 pm

Bahahahaha I'm so adorable. I got one shaded eye in this story. The other is on Gensokyo...
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Postby NSZ » Sun May 20, 2012 6:52 pm

One chapter in and the Big Bad already creeps me the skreeonk out.

Oh god, this is gonna be good.
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Postby Flygon King » Sun May 20, 2012 7:06 pm

King Caesar wrote:Bahahahaha I'm so adorable. I got one shaded eye in this story. The other is on Gensokyo...


Speaking of Gensokyo, expect the next chapter to be up within 2 or 3 days... been really busy/lazy lately...

Liked the first chapter. Oozing nightmare FTW!
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Postby SpanishBulldog63 » Sun May 20, 2012 7:31 pm

NSZ wrote:Oh god, this is gonna be good.


Agreed.I like the way it's starting out,can't wait to see chapter 2
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Postby HayesAJones » Sun May 20, 2012 8:23 pm

Thanks a lot for the compliments, guy! Hope I don't disappoint.
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Postby Godzillatheultimate » Sun May 20, 2012 9:53 pm

I'm liking it so far.
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Postby kikomia » Mon May 21, 2012 3:10 am

Slenderman?
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby Gojira21 » Mon May 21, 2012 7:09 am

Nice Hayes, that first chapter has me hooked. Good job
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Postby Kiryu2012 » Wed May 23, 2012 6:06 pm

I was wondering, since this occurs in the Internet world, could the avatars come back from the dead if the humans wanted them to? Kinda stupid question, I know, but I'm just wondering.
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Postby HayesAJones » Wed May 23, 2012 7:14 pm

Maybe. Or maybe they'd die permanently, even in your mind. OR MAYBE THEY'D COME BACK AS HORRIBLE IMAGINATION ZOMBIES!

But who knows? (Besides me.)

Also, next chapter should be out tomorrow. Hopefully, anyways...
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby Kiryu2012 » Wed May 23, 2012 7:18 pm

Now I'm imagining every avatar that's killed respawning in a spawn room like in TF2.

Donatello: Huh? How could we come back?

Gwangi: Who cares? Let's waste 'em! Have at 'em lads!! *runs off*

Donatello: ...I will never understand him.
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Wed May 23, 2012 7:24 pm

Kiryu2012 wrote:Now I'm imagining every avatar that's killed respawning in a spawn room like in TF2.

Donatello: Huh? How could we come back?

Gwangi: Who cares? Let's waste 'em! Have at 'em lads!! *runs off*

Donatello: ...I will never understand him.

So am I Medic now? :lol:
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby Kiryu2012 » Wed May 23, 2012 8:03 pm

GodzillavsZilla wrote:
Kiryu2012 wrote:Now I'm imagining every avatar that's killed respawning in a spawn room like in TF2.

Donatello: Huh? How could we come back?

Gwangi: Who cares? Let's waste 'em! Have at 'em lads!! *runs off*

Donatello: ...I will never understand him.

So am I Medic now? :lol:

More like Engineer.
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby Gojira21 » Wed May 23, 2012 8:22 pm

So ahhh...wheres this second chap huh? You promised a new one yesterday will be out today!!...oh wait...its only 23 minutes into the next...my bad lmao
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Postby King Caesar » Thu May 24, 2012 4:03 am

>_>

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Patience. This forum has none...
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Re: "Toho Kingdom Chronicles: Rise of Iolleun" Signup/Discus

Postby Kiryu2012 » Thu May 24, 2012 5:25 am

I'm betting after the next chapter this forum won't have much logic...
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