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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby Kiryu2012 » Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:49 pm

That...was...epic...just...epic. Mostly because I would truelly want this hatred to end, but damn.
I actually would expect Gwangi to make a surprise appearance.
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Mon Jun 04, 2012 5:59 pm

Epic, I just have two questions. Why whenever I read a part with Zach in it, I imagine a guy witha squeaky voice and green goggles like a spy has (not from TF2)? And, this is stupid, but. When am I going to come back, am I dead?
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby Godzilla 1995 » Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:02 pm

GodzillavsZilla wrote:Epic, I just have two questions. Why whenever I read a part with Zach in it, I imagine a guy witha squeaky voice and green goggles like a spy has (not from TF2)? And, this is stupid, but. When am I going to come back, am I dead?



In response to your questions;

1. Unfortunately, I don't understand your psyche, but I always pictured Zach as a man in his early twenties, average pitch voice and strong physical abilities. After all, the dude knows how to walk on the ceiling, so he knows his stuff. Often wears dark colord clothes for camoflauge.

2. No, you are not dead. You were taken by Discord as a source of nutrients for Chrysalis, same with Klaus. You may or may not survive.
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby Flygon King » Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:03 pm

Very nice chapter, G1995. An interesting plot development that easilly surpasses my original idea for you... I congratulate you...

Now if you excuse me, I'll be off eating some Gwangi pie...
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby Kiryu2012 » Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:19 pm

Flygon King wrote:Very nice chapter, G1995. An interesting plot development that easilly surpasses my original idea for you... I congratulate you...

Now if you excuse me, I'll be off eating some Gwangi pie...

Gwangi: Why you little-

I kid, I kid. :P This story's gonna end awesome, I know it.
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby SpanishBulldog63 » Mon Jun 04, 2012 6:21 pm

That was a really good,deep chapter.Soooo ironic how you mention me helping my mom in the chapter,and for the last couple years ive been helping her with her spinal problems.
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby HayesAJones » Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:26 pm

Cool. The Elements assignments were kinda confusing, but very neat overall. Can't wait for the finale.

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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby Gojira21 » Wed Jun 06, 2012 10:11 am

Godzilla 1995 wrote:
GodzillavsZilla wrote:Epic, I just have two questions. Why whenever I read a part with Zach in it, I imagine a guy witha squeaky voice and green goggles like a spy has (not from TF2)? And, this is stupid, but. When am I going to come back, am I dead?



In response to your questions;

1. Unfortunately, I don't understand your psyche, but I always pictured Zach as a man in his early twenties, average pitch voice and strong physical abilities. After all, the dude knows how to walk on the ceiling, so he knows his stuff. Often wears dark colord clothes for camoflauge.
2. No, you are not dead. You were taken by Discord as a source of nutrients for Chrysalis, same with Klaus. You may or may not survive.


You know me all to well 8-) lol but good chapter, that was pretty epic i must say! Good job
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby Godzilla 1995 » Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:07 am

Well, guys, like I promised, here it is: the final chapter of Brony Wars. Enjoy guys, it was darn fun to write.


And on a very important note, I think I should tell you the reason I wrote this piece of work in the first place: I've been using this as practice for something much bigger, something much grander. I can't say what it is just yet, but I've been planning something absolutely huge. As soon as I have everything in place, I'll reveal it to the whole board of TK.


Thanks for the praise, for being patient when I took forever, and all the stuff I can't remember right now! Cheers!


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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby Kiryu2012 » Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:20 am

I listened to Guile's theme while reading this. You sir, have accomplished something no one else could. You have created a work of art that shows that we can all love and tolerate, without having to go through hatred and such. you may potentially change the minds of haters, and you showed us that love conquers all in the form of this fanfic. Congratulations, Godzilla 1995.
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:26 am

Epic ending, I don't care that I died not really this was awesome good job Godzilla1995! :mrgreen:
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby SpanishBulldog63 » Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:32 am

That was an amazing read,and nice way to cap off the Brony Wars. Good job Godzilla1995.
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby Godzilla 1995 » Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:43 am

Kiryu2012 wrote:I listened to Guile's theme while reading this. You sir, have accomplished something no one else could. You have created a work of art that shows that we can all love and tolerate, without having to go through hatred and such. you may potentially change the minds of haters, and you showed us that love conquers all in the form of this fanfic. Congratulations, Godzilla 1995.



Well thanks man, but I actually didn't go out to make the point that you saw. My point was to show the limited power that evil has, even when evil seems to be all but invincible. Darkness may rule, it may hurt, but it's time is limited. Light overcomes darkness, no matter what. Once a light hits a darkened room, the darkness is gone. And since darkness will fall, that is why there is always hope. Hope, faith and love.
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby Kiryu2012 » Fri Jun 08, 2012 11:52 am

Godzilla 1995 wrote:
Kiryu2012 wrote:I listened to Guile's theme while reading this. You sir, have accomplished something no one else could. You have created a work of art that shows that we can all love and tolerate, without having to go through hatred and such. you may potentially change the minds of haters, and you showed us that love conquers all in the form of this fanfic. Congratulations, Godzilla 1995.



Well thanks man, but I actually didn't go out to make the point that you saw. My point was to show the limited power that evil has, even when evil seems to be all but invincible. Darkness may rule, it may hurt, but it's time is limited. Light overcomes darkness, no matter what. Once a light hits a darkened room, the darkness is gone. And since darkness will fall, that is why there is always hope. Hope, faith and love.

Indeed, my man. Indeed.
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jun 08, 2012 12:44 pm

Srry I haven't read this is a while. Epic so far.

Stil need to read chaps seven and eight.
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby Flygon King » Fri Jun 08, 2012 1:34 pm

So, I was used only as food for a being that died within minutes of being ressurected...

I must say, a splendid work of art, and a true story well written, G1995. Whatever your ultimate project is, I will be very glad to read it, or even to help you out on it, if you want...
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby HayesAJones » Fri Jun 08, 2012 2:12 pm

Sweet. I got an Element after all. And the lady.

Very cool, G1995, I enjoyed it a lot.
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby gigandude » Fri Jun 08, 2012 3:56 pm

Well I always knew anti-bronys would be the end of me XD. Awsum story man glad to have been a part of it.
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby SpanishBulldog63 » Fri Jun 08, 2012 4:11 pm

I wonder what happened to me 2 years after the war?
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Re: Toho Kingdom: Brony Wars

Postby Godzilla 1995 » Sat Jun 09, 2012 6:31 pm

SpanishBulldog63 wrote:I wonder what happened to me 2 years after the war?



I actually had an idea of maybe doing a spin-off with one of the characters, probably 1703 with Rarity, as I thought it'd be a nice story to follow the restoration of her memories, and the pain and sorrow that would come with it. Rarity had a rough past, as one of the Mane Six, and before that. Who knows, maybe I'll try that someday.
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