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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby GodzillaFreak99 » Mon Sep 16, 2013 5:42 pm

How bout Gwangi vs Kiryu2012? or Gwangi vs Lizardman (Soul Calibur IV)
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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Kiryu2012 » Tue Sep 17, 2013 8:07 pm

Added Corzak's request.
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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Giratina93 » Wed Sep 18, 2013 5:45 am

Two beasts... with power over reality itself to various degrees, duking it out... The fight itself was nice, but the ending with Arma getting gang raped by multiple Gwangi was just... what just happened? Where did the multiple Gwangi come from? The mere thought of all those Gwangi existing... suddenly, the universe is no longer safe.
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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Godzilla1703 » Wed Sep 18, 2013 5:10 pm

*shutters* Gwangi vs. Uncle Grandpa *shutters*
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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Kiryu2012 » Wed Sep 18, 2013 5:16 pm

Godzilla1703 wrote:*shutters* Gwangi vs. Uncle Grandpa *shutters*

No idea who Uncle Grandpa is. :|
My most wanted fight ever is Discord vs Bobobo-bo bo-bobo.
Godzilla has a regen like Wolverine, a skin like Luke Cage, a hero aura like Captain America, a strength like Hulk, an unstoppability like Juggernaut, an immortality like Deadpool.

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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby UltramanGoji » Wed Sep 18, 2013 5:54 pm

Consider yourself lucky.
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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby GodzillaFreak99 » Wed Sep 18, 2013 5:55 pm

Yes, count yourself very, very lucky :evil:
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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Godzilla1703 » Wed Sep 18, 2013 6:24 pm

Kiryu2012 wrote:
Godzilla1703 wrote:*shutters* Gwangi vs. Uncle Grandpa *shutters*

No idea who Uncle Grandpa is. :|

Surpised, hes a new cartoon network toon who is a reality warper. Thought u out of all people would know of it. But u are very lucky .__.
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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Kiryu2012 » Mon Sep 23, 2013 7:42 pm

Added new match.
My most wanted fight ever is Discord vs Bobobo-bo bo-bobo.
Godzilla has a regen like Wolverine, a skin like Luke Cage, a hero aura like Captain America, a strength like Hulk, an unstoppability like Juggernaut, an immortality like Deadpool.

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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Kiryu2012 » Mon Sep 23, 2013 8:18 pm

Corzak The Mighty wrote:Alright... Kiryu, I think this anvil NEEDS to be dropped.

Your character, or should I say, yourself implanted into these things... is a total Mary Sue. He's boring, he's ridiculously overpowered, and he can never ever lose. There's never any interest in watching the character fight, because there's no way he could ever lose. He's got literally ZERO personality, outside of that "he's insane and has got crazy powers, lololo!" And, there's of course his RIDICULOUS power level. He's practically invincible; he's not a character, he's a over bloated fantasy that exists solely to win and make YOURSELF feel better. This also applies to Gwangi, since he suffers from the exact same problems.

Sorry if this offends you, but it really is a serious problem that NEEDS to be addressed if you want to be respected as a writer.

Honestly, I couldn't care less about that. If you had told me about this perhaps months ago, then maybe I'd listen, but by this point I've pretty much gotten too used to OP characters that I no longer care much about their limits in power and such. I do have a scrapped fic idea which had the characters have at the most mountain-level power with a boss having island-level power, but aside from that I just can't care about it. If you don't like my persona being stronger than gods, that's fine. But I'm keeping him as this powerful, and I have no plans of changing that.
My most wanted fight ever is Discord vs Bobobo-bo bo-bobo.
Godzilla has a regen like Wolverine, a skin like Luke Cage, a hero aura like Captain America, a strength like Hulk, an unstoppability like Juggernaut, an immortality like Deadpool.

There's a 'God' in Godzilla for a reason...

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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Kubo » Tue Sep 24, 2013 5:57 am

I didn't want to jump into this mess, but it seems to be getting out of hand.

They are Kiryu's characters. Dumb and overpowered or not, they are his and he can use them as he wants. If you don't want to read about their OP'ed abilities, don't. Read the other matches that dot have them, or don't read at all.

Kiryu, take Corzak's criticism into mind and consider expanding on the characters. No one is forcing you though.
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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Kiryu2012 » Tue Sep 24, 2013 6:16 am

King Caesar wrote:I didn't want to jump into this mess, but it seems to be getting out of hand.

They are Kiryu's characters. Dumb and overpowered or not, they are his and he can use them as he wants. If you don't want to read about their OP'ed abilities, don't. Read the other matches that dot have them, or don't read at all.

Kiryu, take Corzak's criticism into mind and consider expanding on the characters. No one is forcing you though.

Thank you, KC. I was getting pretty annoyed with them complaining about my character and not talk about the matches themselves. And I'm glad to see that us being able to use our characters as we want wasn't ignored by anyone else.
My most wanted fight ever is Discord vs Bobobo-bo bo-bobo.
Godzilla has a regen like Wolverine, a skin like Luke Cage, a hero aura like Captain America, a strength like Hulk, an unstoppability like Juggernaut, an immortality like Deadpool.

There's a 'God' in Godzilla for a reason...

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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby MothraRocks » Tue Sep 24, 2013 6:20 am

^^This. It's his characters, let him do as he pleases. Not saying names but some reactions were rather assholish.
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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Giratina93 » Tue Sep 24, 2013 7:31 am

If I may inject my own opinion into here...

Looking at your latest matches, Kiryu, I've been noticing that you seem to enjoy the status quo staying the same. Kaos and Kynigos having their bickering and war never end, Gwangi always coming out ontop through his sheer randomness, Kiryu never loosing, etc. Now, I'm not saying status quo here is bad, and neither is having powerful characters, but it does make the fights feel a little dull at the end. Sure, the actual combat and the fights themselves are entertaining to read, and I loved the Rusty Walrus vs. Gwangi fight... but to see it end up with the status quo again and again... it feels a little stale. I'm not being rude, I'm only pointing out something I think you should try and fix. The Kaos and Kynigos fights already seem to have something of an interconnected story to them, so have something change up from one of the fights. Shake up the status quo, make an overarching plot that involves them changing and becoming different from it. Have your characters LEARN and ADAPT from these fights so we can see them progress and change from them. I'm not forcing you to change how your doing these fights, Kiryu, it's only something I feel would help improve how you do them.
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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Kaiju-King42 » Tue Sep 24, 2013 8:20 pm

I really don't want to get involved in this... but you guys do realize Corzak was only trying to help Kiryu, right? That's how constructive criticism works. And IMO, anyone who posts their work online for the world to see should expect some form of it no matter how good they are.
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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Venom 2009 » Mon Sep 30, 2013 1:02 pm

Here is an idea.

Gwangi (Movie) vs Jaws
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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Kiryu2012 » Mon Sep 30, 2013 8:32 pm

Venom 2009 wrote:Here is an idea.

Gwangi (Movie) vs Jaws

Hmm, I'll consider it.

And on top of that, I've ONCE AGAIN run out of match ideas. I keep running out of ideas more and more quickly these days. -_-
My most wanted fight ever is Discord vs Bobobo-bo bo-bobo.
Godzilla has a regen like Wolverine, a skin like Luke Cage, a hero aura like Captain America, a strength like Hulk, an unstoppability like Juggernaut, an immortality like Deadpool.

There's a 'God' in Godzilla for a reason...

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Kiryu2012 wrote:Stopped someone from committing suicide

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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Kiryu2012 » Tue Oct 01, 2013 7:07 pm

Added new match.
My most wanted fight ever is Discord vs Bobobo-bo bo-bobo.
Godzilla has a regen like Wolverine, a skin like Luke Cage, a hero aura like Captain America, a strength like Hulk, an unstoppability like Juggernaut, an immortality like Deadpool.

There's a 'God' in Godzilla for a reason...

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Kiryu2012 wrote:Stopped someone from committing suicide

Holy poop man.


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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Kiryu2012 » Tue Oct 08, 2013 5:12 pm

Added new match.
My most wanted fight ever is Discord vs Bobobo-bo bo-bobo.
Godzilla has a regen like Wolverine, a skin like Luke Cage, a hero aura like Captain America, a strength like Hulk, an unstoppability like Juggernaut, an immortality like Deadpool.

There's a 'God' in Godzilla for a reason...

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Kiryu2012 wrote:Stopped someone from committing suicide

Holy poop man.


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Re: My Matches discussion and suggestions

Postby Kiryu2012 » Wed Oct 09, 2013 1:26 pm

Anyone got any requests? Cause I can't come up with anymore matches yet again.
My most wanted fight ever is Discord vs Bobobo-bo bo-bobo.
Godzilla has a regen like Wolverine, a skin like Luke Cage, a hero aura like Captain America, a strength like Hulk, an unstoppability like Juggernaut, an immortality like Deadpool.

There's a 'God' in Godzilla for a reason...

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