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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:13 am

Here's a new post.

Will be the last one for awhile.

I'll continue it soon.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 8:58 am

Well here's some more and another post.

Me personally, the final part of the post is one of my favorite sections of the story. :twisted:

Hope you guys like it so far.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby SpanishBulldog63 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 10:25 am

Damn,Orga's turning into quite the badass.i can't wait to see how that progresses.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 11:07 am

SpanishBulldog63 wrote:Damn,Orga's turning into quite the badass.i can't wait to see how that progresses.


Oh it will be a big surprise. :twisted:

I personally can't wait to get to it.

Hope it will be great.

I decided to bring him back since I like him.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 12:12 pm

Enjoy the next part.

Be warned: it's not for the faint of heart.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby gigandude » Wed Mar 28, 2012 1:06 pm

O.o wow orga turning into a epic kaiju and Nu ultraman Dx. great story so far anyway
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 1:14 pm

gigandude wrote:O.o wow orga turning into a epic kaiju and Nu ultraman Dx. great story so far anyway


Thank you very much.

Orga's definitely turning a real beast.

What was Nu mean? :?:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Venom 2009 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 3:20 pm

I enjoy both Chapters 10 and 11! :D

I was surprise to see Orga was back, and it looks like he is becoming a super monster!

Keep up the great work!
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 3:42 pm

Venom 2009 wrote:I enjoy both Chapters 10 and 11! :D

I was surprise to see Orga was back, and it looks like he is becoming a super monster!

Keep up the great work!


Thank you very much.

I decided to bring Orga back since I love the big guy.

I've got big plans for him too. :twisted:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 5:10 pm

Hope you guys like the new addition.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Kiryu2012 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 5:20 pm

Next up, battle of the Ghidorahs! I've always wanted to see this happen... :twisted:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 5:32 pm

Kiryu2012 wrote:Next up, battle of the Ghidorahs! I've always wanted to see this happen... :twisted:


Hope I make it outstanding. :twisted:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby gigandude » Wed Mar 28, 2012 6:00 pm

Saw-U-In-1/2 wrote:
gigandude wrote:O.o wow orga turning into a epic kaiju and Nu ultraman Dx. great story so far anyway


Thank you very much.

Orga's definitely turning a real beast.

What was Nu mean? :?:

i think its a short version of Nooooooooo.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 7:00 pm

gigandude wrote:
Saw-U-In-1/2 wrote:
gigandude wrote:O.o wow orga turning into a epic kaiju and Nu ultraman Dx. great story so far anyway


Thank you very much.

Orga's definitely turning a real beast.

What was Nu mean? :?:

i think its a short version of Nooooooooo.


The second time that someone said that.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Venom 2009 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 10:25 pm

Saw-U-In-1/2 wrote:Hope you guys like the new addition.


I was hoping to see Grand King Ghidorah in this battle, and here he is! :D

Can’t wait to see the fight between the two King Ghidorahs! :huge:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Thu Mar 29, 2012 8:18 am

Here it is.

The Duel of the Ghidorahs.

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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby King Caesar » Thu Mar 29, 2012 10:18 am

And King Ghidorah has left the building. Pretty good battle, I must say. :) I liked how KG actually held his own pretty well, all thugs considered.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Thu Mar 29, 2012 11:20 am

King Caesar wrote:And King Ghidorah has left the building. Pretty good battle, I must say. :) I liked how KG actually held his own pretty well, all thugs considered.


I really wanted the battle to be interesting.

I really hate one-sided fights.

Glad you liked it.

What else did you like?

Just wondering.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby King Caesar » Thu Mar 29, 2012 11:50 am

What I liked: Both King Ghidorah & Grand King Ghdorah used their abilities to their fullest potential. I always hate when a power is left out or disregarded...well, not always, but in most cases.

What needs improvement: Figurative language. Check up on that stuff. It's important as you advance in writing (I'm still trying to work on it...)
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Thu Mar 29, 2012 11:52 am

King Caesar wrote:What I liked: Both King Ghidorah & Grand King Ghdorah used their abilities to their fullest potential. I always hate when a power is left out or disregarded...well, not always, but in most cases.

What needs improvement: Figurative language. Check up on that stuff. It's important as you advance in writing (I'm still trying to work on it...)


I know, right?

Every power a monster has should be used.

Just added a little more to the post.

I still feel like I need help with my writing.

Thank you for bringing that up.
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