

SpanishBulldog63 wrote:UltramanGoji wrote:Now you know, and knowing is half the battle!
And the other half is fought with a shotgun!

SpanishBulldog63 wrote:Damn,Orga's turning into quite the badass.i can't wait to see how that progresses.



gigandude wrote:O.o wow orga turning into a epic kaiju and Nu ultraman Dx. great story so far anyway

Venom 2009 wrote:I enjoy both Chapters 10 and 11!![]()
I was surprise to see Orga was back, and it looks like he is becoming a super monster!
Keep up the great work!



Kiryu2012 wrote:Next up, battle of the Ghidorahs! I've always wanted to see this happen...

Saw-U-In-1/2 wrote:gigandude wrote:O.o wow orga turning into a epic kaiju and Nu ultraman Dx. great story so far anyway
Thank you very much.
Orga's definitely turning a real beast.
What was Nu mean?

gigandude wrote:Saw-U-In-1/2 wrote:gigandude wrote:O.o wow orga turning into a epic kaiju and Nu ultraman Dx. great story so far anyway
Thank you very much.
Orga's definitely turning a real beast.
What was Nu mean?
i think its a short version of Nooooooooo.

Saw-U-In-1/2 wrote:Hope you guys like the new addition.

King Caesar wrote:And King Ghidorah has left the building. Pretty good battle, I must say.I liked how KG actually held his own pretty well, all thugs considered.

King Caesar wrote:What I liked: Both King Ghidorah & Grand King Ghdorah used their abilities to their fullest potential. I always hate when a power is left out or disregarded...well, not always, but in most cases.
What needs improvement: Figurative language. Check up on that stuff. It's important as you advance in writing (I'm still trying to work on it...)

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