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The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Sat Feb 25, 2012 5:31 am

Tell me what you think of my match.

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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby MothraRocks » Sat Feb 25, 2012 6:24 am

I gotta say Saw, one of your best yet. It's amazing :huge:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Sat Feb 25, 2012 7:15 am

MothraRocks wrote:I gotta say Saw, one of your best yet. It's amazing :huge:


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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby kikomia » Sat Feb 25, 2012 7:39 am

Wow. All I can say is wow. You used many monsters and they each got enough time. I'm just kinda skeptical about Hedorah's death. A monster that gave Godzilla a run for his money? Nope. Hedorah probably isn't death. Well I hope anyways.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Sat Feb 25, 2012 7:42 am

kikomia wrote:Wow. All I can say is wow. You used many monsters and they each got enough time. I'm just kinda skeptical about Hedorah's death. A monster that gave Godzilla a run for his money? Nope. Hedorah probably isn't death. Well I hope anyways.


I'm trying to give all of the monsters enough time in the story.

I just figured since Hedorah is weak against intense heat, it would have cool to see the Garogas' monsters team up to bring him down.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby kikomia » Sat Feb 25, 2012 8:10 am

Never fear, Biollante is here. The spores appearing was a nice touch. And it's Biollante. She will be a match to Zone Fighter. I hope. Nice job on this new chapter.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Sat Feb 25, 2012 8:23 am

kikomia wrote:Never fear, Biollante is here. The spores appearing was a nice touch. And it's Biollante. She will be a match to Zone Fighter. I hope. Nice job on this new chapter.


Hope you will like what I added in for Biollante.

I like to have the monsters make a grand entrance than just having them appear out of nowhere.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby kikomia » Sat Feb 25, 2012 8:31 am

Saw-U-In-1/2 wrote:
kikomia wrote:Never fear, Biollante is here. The spores appearing was a nice touch. And it's Biollante. She will be a match to Zone Fighter. I hope. Nice job on this new chapter.


Hope you will like what I added in for Biollante.

I like to have the monsters make a grand entrance than just having them appear out of nowhere.


And you my friend did that. It's nice to see that you care about details.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Sat Feb 25, 2012 9:09 am

kikomia wrote:
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kikomia wrote:Never fear, Biollante is here. The spores appearing was a nice touch. And it's Biollante. She will be a match to Zone Fighter. I hope. Nice job on this new chapter.


Hope you will like what I added in for Biollante.

I like to have the monsters make a grand entrance than just having them appear out of nowhere.


And you my friend did that. It's nice to see that you care about details.


Details are one of my specialties.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Sat Feb 25, 2012 1:17 pm

Another part of my story is up.

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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby kikomia » Sat Feb 25, 2012 1:22 pm

Woot!! Biollante destroyed Wargilgar and Spyler.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby MothraRocks » Sat Feb 25, 2012 1:24 pm

Biollante is a deadly force :shock:

I'm really lovin this story, the way you manage all the monsters is pretty cool.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Sat Feb 25, 2012 1:47 pm

kikomia wrote:Woot!! Biollante destroyed Wargilgar and Spyler.


How will Needlar and Goramu survive without their allies?

Will Biollante be the winner?

Stay tuned to find out. :twisted:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Sat Feb 25, 2012 1:49 pm

MothraRocks wrote:Biollante is a deadly force :shock:

I'm really lovin this story, the way you manage all the monsters is pretty cool.


Thank you very much.

Basically my plan is to kill some monsters first before bringing in new monsters.

I want it to be evenly written and have every monster have their own parts.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:48 pm

So far i only read the first part but its really great dude. i can't wait to see more. :mrgreen:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:54 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:So far i only read the first part but its really great dude. i can't wait to see more. :mrgreen:


There's plenty yet to come.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby King Caesar » Sun Feb 26, 2012 6:04 am

Yes...MechaGodzilla has arrived. This'll be good :twisted: Great job as usual Saw.
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Sun Feb 26, 2012 8:30 am

King Caesar wrote:Yes...MechaGodzilla has arrived. This'll be good :twisted: Great job as usual Saw.


Get ready because MG's going to light the brawl on fire. :twisted:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:45 pm

Hope you guys will enjoy this next part. :twisted:
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Re: The Big One Discussion.

Postby kikomia » Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:51 pm

MechaGodzilla defeating SpaceGodzilla. This is Blasphemy! This is Madness!!!

Oh and Look at your posts Saw-U-In-1/2
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