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Postby MothraRocks » Sat Feb 18, 2012 9:45 am

Question: To seperate the scenes. Why not use :


*******

Instead of:

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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Feb 18, 2012 10:20 am

MothraRocks wrote:Question: To seperate the scenes. Why not use :


*******

Instead of:

////////


That is a good point, i'll use those.
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby King Caesar » Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:30 pm

*facepalm*

Not too bad...but try to limit your use of 'multiple' and 'then'. It's rather an eyesore.
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:31 pm

King Caesar wrote:*facepalm*

Not too bad...but try to limit your use of 'multiple' and 'then'. It's rather an eyesore.


so i see but you know you like it :P

but anyway what did you think of the ending of the chapter?
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby King Caesar » Sat Feb 18, 2012 12:39 pm

You said "Do not underestimate twice" ...it was unnecessary. But for the most part, it was good!
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:12 pm

Zetton, I can't believe it, he's back?!
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:14 pm

GodzillavsZilla wrote:Zetton, I can't believe it, he's back?!


Thanks dude i'm glad you liked it :mrgreen: and were you really suprised that he is back?
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby kikomia » Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:15 pm

GodzillavsZilla wrote:Zetton, I can't believe it, he's black?!


Nope, he is yellow.

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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:16 pm

kikomia wrote:
GodzillavsZilla wrote:Zetton, I can't believe it, he's black?!


Nope, he is yellow.

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Well Zetton is part black.
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:19 pm

kikomia wrote:
GodzillavsZilla wrote:Zetton, I can't believe it, he's black?!


Nope, he is yellow.

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Who else but, Kiki? :D
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Mar 25, 2012 2:21 am

New Chapter is up! I hope you all like it! :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Sun Mar 25, 2012 10:51 am

The new chapter's awesome, can't wait to see EX Zetton fight Godzilla :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Mar 25, 2012 10:53 am

GodzillavsZilla wrote:The new chapter's awesome, can't wait to see EX Zetton fight Godzilla :mrgreen:


Thanks dude i'm glad you liked it
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby King Caesar » Sun Mar 25, 2012 12:35 pm

I'm having trouble with the whole Asmodeus thing. She and the Godzilla series just dont connect for me. It's a personal thing, GvJ, so don't go changing your story because of this.

And those ////// ...yeah, see now they're growing on me. Thanks a lot. :P

Oh, and the most important part: Good work! :)
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Mar 25, 2012 12:39 pm

King Caesar wrote:I'm having trouble with the whole Asmodeus thing. She and the Godzilla series just dont connect for me. It's a personal thing, GvJ, so don't go changing your story because of this.

And those ////// ...yeah, see now they're growing on me. Thanks a lot. :P

Oh, and the most important part: Good work! :)


Remember Caesar the key word there is "Fan". ;) :P

But don't worry the Asmodeus and the Godzilla series will all make sense in this final chapter of this story.

also thanks dude i'm glad you liked it. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby Flygon King » Sun Mar 25, 2012 12:49 pm

Don't worry, Caesar, all will come together... very, very soon...

As usual, I enjoy what I read, and I'm enjoying this quite abit... Keep up the good work...

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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby King Caesar » Sun Mar 25, 2012 5:49 pm

Flygon King wrote:Now, where did I put that sign to advertise for Sins of the Ancestors?

I see what you did there. ;)
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Apr 07, 2012 9:32 am

Last chapter is up! I hope you all like it :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby Flygon King » Sat Apr 07, 2012 9:51 am

And so, the darkness awaits our heroes...

Very, very nice... Soon, the Devourer of Universes will see to their demise... and show them just how tame Hell would be in comparison to her might...
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Re: Godzilla:The Warning of the Inevitable Disscussion board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Apr 07, 2012 9:53 am

Flygon King wrote:And so, the darkness awaits our heroes...

Very, very nice... Soon, the Devourer of Universes will see to their demise... and show them just how tame Hell would be in comparison to her might...


Yes its all but a matter of time till it begins. also thanks dude i'm glad you liked it :mrgreen:
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