Godzilla disscussion board

[kikomia]

Mmk? = Ok?

And you can't be a Grammar Nazi. It's not in your blood.

Since when do i have blood? I have acid.

[MothraRocks]

I have had to hold myself back from correcting people's grammar before (I know mine isn't always perfect).

[kikomia]

I have had to hold myself back from correcting people's grammar before (I know mine isn't always perfect).

Mine isn't perfect either but still, maybe correcting him will improve his grammar.

[MothraRocks]

No, I mean with everyone lol, but yeah, that too lol.

[Alienvspredatorules]

I am not use to this amount of negtive comments this crushed my spirt.
Godzilla is the reason why i am here.
Rocky is the reason why i don't give up easy.
My freinds is the reason why i have so much spirt.
But even with all this things i my spirt is geting crushed.
So who thinks that i should never wirte a fanfic agein

[kikomia]

I didn't say you should stop making fanfics, i just said you should improve your grammar. Let me give you a tip. Before posting a fanfic you should read it to avoid the mistakes and then post. Atleast that's how i do it.

[Superrex]

Not me.
Keep trying. You fan fics will get better.

[MothraRocks]

If you wanna write, just write. But also learn to take critisim; no one likes it, but it's there.

[GodzillavsJason]

If you wanna write, just write. But also learn to take critisim; no one likes it, but it's there.

except if its from Roger Ebert, then everyone hates him atuomatically

[Kaiju-King42]

Don't forget to use periods and capital letters when needed. That alone will help your stories quality increase tenfold.

[Alienvspredatorules]

Anyway i have decied to take up boxing

[Hedorah]

Anyway i have decied to take up boxing

That is so relevent to fan fiction

[kikomia]

Anyway i have decied to take up boxing

That is so relevent to fan fiction

He means he wants to fight us for criticising his Fan Fiction.

[Alienvspredatorules]

I am not going to beat you guys up when i am boxer any way read my freind lachlyzilla's storys and can you guys give me a break

[LachyZilla]

Jack, I have been your friend for like 2 years now and i haven't read some of your best titles but still we all have to take criticism, I know you don't like it and you punch me for disliking your likes just please try hard it wouldn't be to hard opening a dusty ol'book once in a while but I've done it and I still think my writing is a terd in a chocolate factory. Just try hard for me and Godzilla

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[Gawdziller]

Anyway i have decied to take up boxing

That is so relevent to fan fiction

He means he wants to fight us for criticising his Fan Fiction.

Just like Uwe Boll.

Wait. His storytelling techniques make sense now.

[Gojira21]

So incoherent...can't read...and when words get through I see this...

"Feel the pain of ice shards."

I don't drop by the FF section often, but sometimes I pop in when I'm bored. But this...as someone who takes his own writing seriously, this is killing my soul and making me wish I never look at my keyboard again.

Make it go away. Please.

Finally someone who agrees. Kid, please stop, come back and try again when you have some form of writing ability. It's not working out AT ALL! Everyone else is really being too nice to you.

Thats it i try my best & not i stil get yelled at by people on this stie i have great ideas but thanks to i am never going to wirte a fanfic agein NEVER.

Hey man its called "constructive criticsm"...no-one is saying you need to quite writting stories. If you enjoy writting them, dont quite man. The only was you be able to improve is from practice. I was just like you were when was younger, but over time i got better from a multitude of ways: reading others stories, taking advice, et.c. Criticsm is there for a reason to point out what is lacking and what do not need, it proves very useful. Trust me, im still not perfect at writting and really, no-one is.