TKFA Goes on Vacation (TKFA 3) Discussion Board

[HayesAJones]

Fun new chapter, bit short though.

[GodzillavsJason]

damn capitalist scum.

That made me lol. Great and Funny chapter dude

I didn't not enjoy the part where Zeno mouth rapped me, just to get a hamburger from me. I'm scared for life now

[King Caesar]

Yeah, well that's what you get! You deserved that one. Next chapter will be a little more significant to the plot, I promise. I thought a dinner would be a nice way to introduce the rest of the human cast.

[GodzillavsJason]

Yeah, well that's what you get! You deserved that one. Next chapter will be a little more significant to the plot, I promise. I thought a dinner would be a nice way to introduce the rest of the human cast.

well then it looks like i'm going to have to find some sort of revenge on your character in Life in TK city.

[UltramanGoji]

damn capitalist scum.

That made me lol. Great and Funny chapter dude

I didn't not enjoy the part where Zeno mouth rapped me, just to get a hamburger from me. I'm scared for life now

You did not give him your sandvich.

You brought it upon yourself.

[GodzillavsJason]

Hey i wanted my burger because i love burgers/sandwiches and that was no excuse to mouth rape me. I've just felt like i've been raped in the face.

[UltramanGoji]

Hey i wanted my burger because i love burgers/sandwiches and that was no excuse to mouth rape me. I've just felt like i've been raped in the face.

Once Zeno asks, you never say no.

If you say no, vacuum-mouth activates.

And I know you no te gusta the vacuum-mouth.

[King Caesar]

Yeah, well that's what you get! You deserved that one. Next chapter will be a little more significant to the plot, I promise. I thought a dinner would be a nice way to introduce the rest of the human cast.

well then it looks like i'm going to have to find some sort of revenge on your character in Life in TK city.

skreeonk...I'll be sure to have something ready for your character.

[GodzillavsJason]

Do it and i'll be the first one to nuke your country! JK dude

[Dynomy84]

Hey, I knew I'd get lucky...BUT THIS IS BEYOND WHAT I EXPECTED!!!!

This new chapter was nice, and gave me a few laughs. Like Hayes said, it was kinda short though. Nonetheless, still enjoyable.

[King Caesar]

An inspirational explosion occurred last night, and this is the result. A good length chapter with plenty of drunken humor and perhaps even a few chills. Enjoy.

[kikomia]

Anabelle is the spirit. Case Closed. Nice chapter KC

[Flygon King]

...And just like that, Aikaro's been dumped, or worse...

[Dynomy84]

I liked this chapter! It was nice, and left me wondering what happened at the end... Oh well!

[HayesAJones]

Not even the ghost-ladies can resist visiting the Hayesman's room.

[King Caesar]

Not even the ghost-ladies can resist visiting the Hayesman's room.

You know, to tell you the truth I don't know why she was in there...

...oh wait. Nevermind

[UltramanGoji]

If I may make a suggestion?

If some of you don't know, the character Zenon was created by me and, again if you don't know, I am a brony.

Now, I don't want to sound like a raging fanboy here, but maybe in Zenon's next appearence you could maybe put an "easter egg" or a reference to this?

I was thinking about maybe developing Zenon himself into his own short series of stories and this would be one of his traits.

If you feel this is too out of place or whatever, I'm ok with it.

[King Caesar]

No not all, that works! Granted, it won't be in this next addition, but I'll make sure it is somewhere in the next few.

[King Caesar]

So yeah, new part. Sorry if you get the chills!

[Flygon King]

Cursed evil spirits! AAAAH!

*Calls in HAX Miko to take care of the situation...*

Nice chapter, btw... I am really liking how this story's turning out.