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Postby HayesAJones » Fri Mar 02, 2012 3:13 pm

Fun new chapter, bit short though.

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Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Mar 02, 2012 4:24 pm

damn capitalist scum.


That made me lol. Great and Funny chapter dude :lol:

I didn't not enjoy the part where Zeno mouth rapped me, just to get a hamburger from me. I'm scared for life now :freak:
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Postby Kubo » Fri Mar 02, 2012 4:56 pm

Yeah, well that's what you get! You deserved that one. :P Next chapter will be a little more significant to the plot, I promise. I thought a dinner would be a nice way to introduce the rest of the human cast.
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Mar 02, 2012 5:01 pm

King Caesar wrote:Yeah, well that's what you get! You deserved that one. :P Next chapter will be a little more significant to the plot, I promise. I thought a dinner would be a nice way to introduce the rest of the human cast.


well then it looks like i'm going to have to find some sort of revenge on your character in Life in TK city. :P
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NSZ wrote:It's only been two goddamn days, and I can't believe I'm saying this, but I already miss Al's terrible puns.

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Postby UltramanGoji » Fri Mar 02, 2012 7:25 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:
damn capitalist scum.


That made me lol. Great and Funny chapter dude :lol:

I didn't not enjoy the part where Zeno mouth rapped me, just to get a hamburger from me. I'm scared for life now :freak:


You did not give him your sandvich.

You brought it upon yourself.
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Mar 02, 2012 7:29 pm

Hey i wanted my burger because i love burgers/sandwiches and that was no excuse to mouth rape me. I've just felt like i've been raped in the face.
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NSZ wrote:It's only been two goddamn days, and I can't believe I'm saying this, but I already miss Al's terrible puns.

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Postby UltramanGoji » Fri Mar 02, 2012 7:31 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:Hey i wanted my burger because i love burgers/sandwiches and that was no excuse to mouth rape me. I've just felt like i've been raped in the face.


Once Zeno asks, you never say no.

If you say no, vacuum-mouth activates.

And I know you no te gusta the vacuum-mouth.
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Postby Kubo » Fri Mar 02, 2012 8:39 pm

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King Caesar wrote:Yeah, well that's what you get! You deserved that one. :P Next chapter will be a little more significant to the plot, I promise. I thought a dinner would be a nice way to introduce the rest of the human cast.


well then it looks like i'm going to have to find some sort of revenge on your character in Life in TK city. :P

skreeonk...I'll be sure to have something ready for your character. -_-
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Mar 02, 2012 8:43 pm

Do it and i'll be the first one to nuke your country! :P JK dude
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Postby Dynomy84 » Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:08 pm

Hey, I knew I'd get lucky...BUT THIS IS BEYOND WHAT I EXPECTED!!!!

This new chapter was nice, and gave me a few laughs. Like Hayes said, it was kinda short though. Nonetheless, still enjoyable.
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Postby Kubo » Sat Mar 03, 2012 5:12 am

An inspirational explosion occurred last night, and this is the result. A good length chapter with plenty of drunken humor and perhaps even a few chills. Enjoy. 8-)
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Postby Alucard » Sat Mar 03, 2012 5:33 am

Anabelle is the spirit. Case Closed. Nice chapter KC ;)
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Postby Giratina93 » Sat Mar 03, 2012 6:19 am

...And just like that, Aikaro's been dumped, or worse...
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Postby Dynomy84 » Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:31 am

I liked this chapter! It was nice, and left me wondering what happened at the end... Oh well!
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Postby HayesAJones » Sat Mar 03, 2012 11:55 am

Not even the ghost-ladies can resist visiting the Hayesman's room.

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Postby Kubo » Sat Mar 03, 2012 1:13 pm

HayesAJones wrote:Not even the ghost-ladies can resist visiting the Hayesman's room.

You know, to tell you the truth I don't know why she was in there...

...oh wait. Nevermind ;)
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Postby UltramanGoji » Mon Mar 05, 2012 6:02 pm

If I may make a suggestion?

If some of you don't know, the character Zenon was created by me and, again if you don't know, I am a brony.

Now, I don't want to sound like a raging fanboy here, but maybe in Zenon's next appearence you could maybe put an "easter egg" or a reference to this?

I was thinking about maybe developing Zenon himself into his own short series of stories and this would be one of his traits.

If you feel this is too out of place or whatever, I'm ok with it.
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Postby Kubo » Tue Mar 06, 2012 3:58 am

No not all, that works! :) Granted, it won't be in this next addition, but I'll make sure it is somewhere in the next few.
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Postby Kubo » Fri Mar 23, 2012 5:45 am

So yeah, new part. Sorry if you get the chills! :P
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Postby Giratina93 » Fri Mar 23, 2012 5:46 am

Cursed evil spirits! AAAAH!

*Calls in HAX Miko to take care of the situation...*

Nice chapter, btw... I am really liking how this story's turning out.
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