Toho Kingdom

Hayes and his puns...

Good chapter, amigo.

Flygon King wrote:ANABELLA! NOOOOOO!

Oh well, She was expendable, anyway. One of my compound Touhou Characters.

While the name IS original, part of her idea came from the knife-wielding maid Sakuya from Embodiment of Scarlet Devil, and the other part came from the Gardener of the Netherworld, Youmu... Particularly her being two entities...

Interesting. Anabelle was quite a blast to work with. Hahaha...ok, I'll stop. My one gripe is that I didn't feel like I used her to her full potential. She disappeared too early. I didn't plan that out, and in my opinion cost me a couple good chapters. But, TKFA 4 will fill that gaping hole in my creative thought.

Right. I did notice that. THere was much you could have done with her being half human, half-phantom (Don't ask how that works.) But... I'm comfortable with what you did...

You leave me skeptical, but I'll go with it. I promise not to disappoint next time.

Flygons charactets are very, detailed orientated and sometimes need half a story to incorporate fully!...glad i have a whole series to work Kanna

Flygon King wrote:THere was much you could have done with her being half human, half-phantom (Don't ask how that works.)

You could ask this guy:

*Facepalm.*

Danny Phantom ain't gonna cut it. Youmu was born half-phantom, and half human, and so was her father. No machinery accident can explain that in a world on par with feudal japan...

Persephone: I know...

...Haven't you poked your head in more places than is necessary?

"Kicks Persephone back into the gap she came from.*

Anyways, I'm certain you can doa good job with my characters in TKFA 4, KC...

Wow I'm suprised Annabelle died, I thought she would be the last villain to die. But non the less a great action chapter.

Z-Man says adieu and Kristijan walks off set. Or does he...I'm not really sure.

One chapter left everybody!

Nice chapter. Z-Man's dead, Cesar lived, and Hayes got a donut. satisfying.

Nice chapter Z-Man is dead, Cesar and friends are still alive but the best person is dead...... ME! JK But I can't wait to see the last chapter.

Nice! So, one chapter left huh? Can't wait what's in store for the big finale!

Lol well taht was a fun chatper, heck of way for me to die thought...DAMNIT!!!! >.< lol ohwell good job!

Can the fourth wall be saved? I don't think so...

HayesAJones wrote:Can the fourth wall be saved? I don't think so...

Fuck the fourth wall. I'm chipping away at the fifth wall at this point!

Heh, never got around to reviewing this ^_^;

Very nice chapter, I liked it, and can't wait for the next one. Who needs the fourth wall?

Yes, I'm quite lazy today, and that is my review

MothraRocks wrote:Heh, never got around to reviewing this ^_^;

Very nice conclusion, I liked it, and can't wait for the next one. Who needs the fourth wall?

Yes, I'm quite lazy today, and that is my review

Lazy? You mean no PKA update today?

I liked this chapter. the final battle is coming...

Flygon King wrote:

MothraRocks wrote:Heh, never got around to reviewing this ^_^;

Very nice conclusion, I liked it, and can't wait for the next one. Who needs the fourth wall?

Yes, I'm quite lazy today, and that is my review

Lazy? You mean no PKA update today?

I'm MM'ing. Cut me some slack, and chuck aome luck my way while you're at it. Lol.

MothraRocks wrote:

Flygon King wrote:

MothraRocks wrote:Heh, never got around to reviewing this ^_^;

Very nice conclusion, I liked it, and can't wait for the next one. Who needs the fourth wall?

Yes, I'm quite lazy today, and that is my review

Lazy? You mean no PKA update today?

I'm MM'ing. Cut me some slack, and chuck aome luck my way while you're at it. Lol.

I'm throwing all the luck I can, but I only have so much...

I'll fling you some luck, MR, if you stop spamming in my beautiful thread!