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Re: TKFA Goes on Vacation (TKFA 3) Discussion Board

Postby UltramanGoji » Thu May 24, 2012 2:22 pm

Hayes and his puns...

Good chapter, amigo.
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Postby Kubo » Thu May 24, 2012 3:49 pm

Flygon King wrote:ANABELLA! NOOOOOO!

Oh well, She was expendable, anyway. One of my compound Touhou Characters.

While the name IS original, part of her idea came from the knife-wielding maid Sakuya from Embodiment of Scarlet Devil, and the other part came from the Gardener of the Netherworld, Youmu... Particularly her being two entities...

Interesting. Anabelle was quite a blast to work with. Hahaha...ok, I'll stop. My one gripe is that I didn't feel like I used her to her full potential. She disappeared too early. I didn't plan that out, and in my opinion cost me a couple good chapters. But, TKFA 4 will fill that gaping hole in my creative thought.
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Postby Giratina93 » Thu May 24, 2012 4:37 pm

Right. I did notice that. THere was much you could have done with her being half human, half-phantom (Don't ask how that works.) But... I'm comfortable with what you did...
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Postby Kubo » Thu May 24, 2012 5:57 pm

You leave me skeptical, but I'll go with it. I promise not to disappoint next time.
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Postby Gojira21 » Thu May 24, 2012 6:04 pm

Flygons charactets are very, detailed orientated and sometimes need half a story to incorporate fully!...glad i have a whole series to work Kanna 8-)
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Postby HayesAJones » Thu May 24, 2012 7:12 pm

Flygon King wrote:THere was much you could have done with her being half human, half-phantom (Don't ask how that works.)

You could ask this guy:

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Postby Giratina93 » Thu May 24, 2012 7:17 pm

*Facepalm.*

Danny Phantom ain't gonna cut it. Youmu was born half-phantom, and half human, and so was her father. No machinery accident can explain that in a world on par with feudal japan...

Persephone: I know...

...Haven't you poked your head in more places than is necessary?

"Kicks Persephone back into the gap she came from.*

Anyways, I'm certain you can doa good job with my characters in TKFA 4, KC...
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri May 25, 2012 5:56 pm

Wow I'm suprised Annabelle died, I thought she would be the last villain to die. But non the less a great action chapter.
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Postby Kubo » Wed Jul 11, 2012 8:39 am

Z-Man says adieu and Kristijan walks off set. Or does he...I'm not really sure. :|

One chapter left everybody!
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Postby GodzillavsZilla » Wed Jul 11, 2012 9:34 am

Nice chapter. Z-Man's dead, Cesar lived, and Hayes got a donut. :) satisfying.
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Jul 11, 2012 11:24 am

Nice chapter Z-Man is dead, Cesar and friends are still alive but the best person is dead...... ME! :P JK But I can't wait to see the last chapter. :mrgreen:
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Postby Dynomy84 » Wed Jul 11, 2012 11:47 am

Nice! So, one chapter left huh? Can't wait what's in store for the big finale!
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Postby Gojira21 » Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:19 pm

Lol well taht was a fun chatper, heck of way for me to die thought...DAMNIT!!!! >.< lol ohwell good job!
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Postby HayesAJones » Wed Jul 11, 2012 7:25 pm

Can the fourth wall be saved? I don't think so...

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Postby Kubo » Wed Jul 11, 2012 9:27 pm

HayesAJones wrote:Can the fourth wall be saved? I don't think so...

skreeonk the fourth wall. I'm chipping away at the fifth wall at this point! :lol:
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Postby MothraRocks » Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:15 pm

Heh, never got around to reviewing this ^_^;

Very nice chapter, I liked it, and can't wait for the next one. Who needs the fourth wall?

Yes, I'm quite lazy today, and that is my review :P
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Postby Giratina93 » Sun Jul 15, 2012 3:17 pm

MothraRocks wrote:Heh, never got around to reviewing this ^_^;

Very nice conclusion, I liked it, and can't wait for the next one. Who needs the fourth wall?

Yes, I'm quite lazy today, and that is my review :P


Lazy? You mean no PKA update today?

I liked this chapter. the final battle is coming...
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Postby MothraRocks » Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:22 pm

Flygon King wrote:
MothraRocks wrote:Heh, never got around to reviewing this ^_^;

Very nice conclusion, I liked it, and can't wait for the next one. Who needs the fourth wall?

Yes, I'm quite lazy today, and that is my review :P


Lazy? You mean no PKA update today?


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Postby Giratina93 » Mon Jul 16, 2012 3:51 pm

MothraRocks wrote:
Flygon King wrote:
MothraRocks wrote:Heh, never got around to reviewing this ^_^;

Very nice conclusion, I liked it, and can't wait for the next one. Who needs the fourth wall?

Yes, I'm quite lazy today, and that is my review :P


Lazy? You mean no PKA update today?


I'm MM'ing. Cut me some slack, and chuck aome luck my way while you're at it. Lol.


I'm throwing all the luck I can, but I only have so much...
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Postby Kubo » Mon Jul 16, 2012 8:10 pm

I'll fling you some luck, MR, if you stop spamming in my beautiful thread! :P
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