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Re: TKFA Goes on Vacation (TKFA 3) Discussion Board

Postby HayesAJones » Tue May 15, 2012 1:48 pm

This will either go really well or really bad for me.

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Re: TKFA Goes on Vacation (TKFA 3) Discussion Board

Postby MothraRocks » Tue May 15, 2012 1:54 pm

King Caesar wrote:So, MR...you aren't gonna screw over any of my characters in your stories after youre finished reading this chapter, right? :|


Why do I even bother singing up for your fics?! You have some obsession with killing me! It's like -- Never mind, I'll find, Someone like you to write a story for me! Sorry, if this hurts, but just remember I wish nothing but the best for you too.

I couldn't resist :P

Anyway, good chapter, plenty of action... singing from me...obvious play on lyrics...nice cliffhanger...yup, that's pretty much it, my character can lay at rest knowing how awesome his last chapter was lol. Can't wait to read more.
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Re: TKFA Goes on Vacation (TKFA 3) Discussion Board

Postby UltramanGoji » Tue May 15, 2012 2:13 pm

"Take your hand off me, you damn dirty maid," Jake commanded with bitter resent.

"Nice Ape reference," Kristijan said. Z-Man and Gratey both expelled audible sighs. "What? Am I not allowed to express my feelings towards somebody's reference to a classic Sci-Fi movie?"

"You don't say what movie it's from," Z-Man explained through gritted teeth. "It's supposed to be subtle reference, not a blatant shout-out."

"It was too subtle. I was just clearing it up for the reader."

"Are you kidding--"


Best part of the whole chapter.
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Re: TKFA Goes on Vacation (TKFA 3) Discussion Board

Postby Giratina93 » Tue May 15, 2012 2:20 pm

MothraRocks wrote:
King Caesar wrote:So, MR...you aren't gonna screw over any of my characters in your stories after youre finished reading this chapter, right? :|


Why do I even bother singing up for your fics?! You have some obsession with killing me! It's like -- Never mind, I'll find, Someone like you to write a story for me! Sorry, if this hurts, but just remember I wish nothing but the best for you too.



If it makes you feel better, your character in ToG is in vastly safer hands... maybe. :twisted:
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Postby MothraRocks » Tue May 15, 2012 2:34 pm

>:(

I'm about to send you a very strongly worded PM Flygon! And I will!
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Postby Giratina93 » Tue May 15, 2012 2:38 pm

*Reads PM, then faints.*

Shinki: I think he's dead. Great... ya killed the poor guy from verbal abuse.

Persephone: He's lived through worst. He's only fainted. He'll be back up within a post or two...
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Postby MothraRocks » Tue May 15, 2012 2:39 pm

Flygon King wrote:*Reads PM, then faints.*

Shinki: I think he's dead. Great... ya killed the poor guy from verbal abuse.

Persephone: He's lived through worst. He's only fainted. He'll be back up within a post or two...


You're welcome. No prob ;)
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Re: TKFA Goes on Vacation (TKFA 3) Discussion Board

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Tue May 15, 2012 2:41 pm

I like the new chapter :). Wait, it's the last? Is my character going to be in the next TKFA?
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Postby Gojira21 » Tue May 15, 2012 3:11 pm

Nice chap lol i thought it was funny seeing Jake trying to sing like Adele hahaha
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Postby MothraRocks » Tue May 15, 2012 3:13 pm

GodzillavsZilla wrote:I like the new chapter :). Wait, it's the last? Is my character going to be in the next TKFA?


It's not the last, there's still a few more to come.
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Postby Kubo » Tue May 15, 2012 4:07 pm

GodzillavsZilla wrote:I like the new chapter :). Wait, it's the last? Is my character going to be in the next TKFA?

Oh goodness, no! I wouldn't end it on that note.pre people need to die before I can even start to work on TKFA 4. Your character will not be in TKFA 4, so you probably need to make a new one.
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue May 15, 2012 4:08 pm

Liked the new chapter and it has a good cliffhanger but it needs more me. But other than that good chapter
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Re: TKFA Goes on Vacation (TKFA 3) Discussion Board

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Tue May 15, 2012 4:08 pm

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GodzillavsZilla wrote:I like the new chapter :). Wait, it's the last? Is my character going to be in the next TKFA?

Oh goodness, no! I wouldn't end it on that note.pre people need to die before I can even start to work on TKFA 4. Your character will not be in TKFA 4, so you probably need to make a new one.

Ok, and I warn you, someone will avenge his death
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Postby Gojira21 » Tue May 15, 2012 4:22 pm

I should have asked lol is either of my two characters possibly gona die?
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Re: TKFA Goes on Vacation (TKFA 3) Discussion Board

Postby Kubo » Tue May 15, 2012 4:50 pm

Both, tragically, will die. :| It's a sad, sad world we live in.
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Postby UltramanGoji » Tue May 15, 2012 5:14 pm

I'm afraid Zeno's going to die, isn't he?
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Re: TKFA Goes on Vacation (TKFA 3) Discussion Board

Postby Kubo » Tue May 15, 2012 5:35 pm

Nope, no more spoilers. You'll just have to read and find out. :)
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Postby Gojira21 » Tue May 15, 2012 7:45 pm

King Caesar wrote:Both, tragically, will die. :| It's a sad, sad world we live in.


Bastard!!! >.< lol nah jk

Zhost will be far superior than those two anyway lol
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Re: TKFA Goes on Vacation (TKFA 3) Discussion Board

Postby Kubo » Wed May 23, 2012 6:23 am

A couple great deaths, confrontations, and more. You better love these nuts. I do. Not as much as the scene where my character was drunk, but it's up there.
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Re: TKFA Goes on Vacation (TKFA 3) Discussion Board

Postby Alucard » Wed May 23, 2012 6:30 am

Damn budget cuts. Nice job on the chapter King Racer!
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