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Hayes and his puns...

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Flygon King wrote:ANABELLA! NOOOOOO!

Oh well, She was expendable, anyway. One of my compound Touhou Characters.

While the name IS original, part of her idea came from the knife-wielding maid Sakuya from Embodiment of Scarlet Devil, and the other part came from the Gardener of the Netherworld, Youmu... Particularly her being two entities...
Interesting. Anabelle was quite a blast to work with. Hahaha...ok, I'll stop. My one gripe is that I didn't feel like I used her to her full potential. She disappeared too early. I didn't plan that out, and in my opinion cost me a couple good chapters. But, TKFA 4 will fill that gaping hole in my creative thought.
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Right. I did notice that. THere was much you could have done with her being half human, half-phantom (Don't ask how that works.) But... I'm comfortable with what you did...
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You leave me skeptical, but I'll go with it. I promise not to disappoint next time.
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Flygons charactets are very, detailed orientated and sometimes need half a story to incorporate fully!...glad i have a whole series to work Kanna 8-)
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Flygon King wrote:THere was much you could have done with her being half human, half-phantom (Don't ask how that works.)
You could ask this guy:

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*Facepalm.*

Danny Phantom ain't gonna cut it. Youmu was born half-phantom, and half human, and so was her father. No machinery accident can explain that in a world on par with feudal japan...

Persephone: I know...

...Haven't you poked your head in more places than is necessary?

"Kicks Persephone back into the gap she came from.*

Anyways, I'm certain you can doa good job with my characters in TKFA 4, KC...
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Wow I'm suprised Annabelle died, I thought she would be the last villain to die. But non the less a great action chapter.
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Z-Man says adieu and Kristijan walks off set. Or does he...I'm not really sure. :|

One chapter left everybody!
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Nice chapter. Z-Man's dead, Cesar lived, and Hayes got a donut. :) satisfying.
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Nice chapter Z-Man is dead, Cesar and friends are still alive but the best person is dead...... ME! :P JK But I can't wait to see the last chapter. :mrgreen:
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Nice! So, one chapter left huh? Can't wait what's in store for the big finale!
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Lol well taht was a fun chatper, heck of way for me to die thought...DAMNIT!!!! >.< lol ohwell good job!
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Can the fourth wall be saved? I don't think so...

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HayesAJones wrote:Can the fourth wall be saved? I don't think so...
skreeonk the fourth wall. I'm chipping away at the fifth wall at this point! :lol:
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Heh, never got around to reviewing this ^_^;

Very nice chapter, I liked it, and can't wait for the next one. Who needs the fourth wall?

Yes, I'm quite lazy today, and that is my review :P
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MothraRocks wrote:Heh, never got around to reviewing this ^_^;

Very nice conclusion, I liked it, and can't wait for the next one. Who needs the fourth wall?

Yes, I'm quite lazy today, and that is my review :P

Lazy? You mean no PKA update today?

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Flygon King wrote:
MothraRocks wrote:Heh, never got around to reviewing this ^_^;

Very nice conclusion, I liked it, and can't wait for the next one. Who needs the fourth wall?

Yes, I'm quite lazy today, and that is my review :P

Lazy? You mean no PKA update today?
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MothraRocks wrote:
Flygon King wrote:
MothraRocks wrote:Heh, never got around to reviewing this ^_^;

Very nice conclusion, I liked it, and can't wait for the next one. Who needs the fourth wall?

Yes, I'm quite lazy today, and that is my review :P

Lazy? You mean no PKA update today?
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I'll fling you some luck, MR, if you stop spamming in my beautiful thread! :P
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