Life at Toho King City Season 2 Disscussion Board

[GodzillavsJason]

Awesome ending dude, really liked it, and it was funny

Thanks dude i'm glad you liked it and thought it was funny

[King Caesar]

Damn, GvJ, that last chapter is way too long for one sitting. I'm sorry, I didn't read it. :\

did you atleast read part of it or have plans to read the rest of it soon?

I will. I want to, but I need a big chunk of time to do it.

[King Caesar]

I did it! Took me twenty damn minutes, but now I can say I did! Yeahahahaha!

Nitpick time!

“Holy shit! Holy crap! Goddamnit! God skreeonk Damnit! Jesus skreeonk Christ!” Klaus smiled as he had his arms crossed and said, “How do you like me now?”

Ironically, saying God's name in vain actually is a sin...so yeah, Klaus didn't really improve his position in Hell by yelling that.

As a whole, I felt Season 2 was good, though the last chapter was pretty dark in comparison to the rest and Klaus's vision may've given away too much about Season 3. One common thing I see throughout the writing is that whenever somebody talks, you always say who is speaking. That's not necessary in certain 1 on 1 situations (like when Klaus is talking to the Devil). It's not a huge problem--it's not one at all--but just consider it in Season 3. Otherwise, great work. And you can kill my character if you want in Season 3...I need a change of pace anyways.

[GodzillavsJason]

I did it! Took me twenty damn minutes, but now I can say I did! Yeahahahaha!

Nitpick time!

“Holy shit! Holy crap! Goddamnit! God skreeonk Damnit! Jesus skreeonk Christ!” Klaus smiled as he had his arms crossed and said, “How do you like me now?”

Ironically, saying God's name in vain actually is a sin...so yeah, Klaus didn't really improve his position in Hell by yelling that.

As a whole, I felt Season 2 was good, though the last chapter was pretty dark in comparison to the rest and Klaus's vision may've given away too much about Season 3. One common thing I see throughout the writing is that whenever somebody talks, you always say who is speaking. That's not necessary in certain 1 on 1 situations (like when Klaus is talking to the Devil). It's not a huge problem--it's not one at all--but just consider it in Season 3. Otherwise, great work. And you can kill my character if you want in Season 3...I need a change of pace anyways.

Glad you the like the chapter dude and don't worry your time will come and so will everyone else's time will come. Its only a matter of time before all hell brakes loose.

[Flygon King]

I did it! Took me twenty damn minutes, but now I can say I did! Yeahahahaha!

Nitpick time!

“Holy shit! Holy crap! Goddamnit! God skreeonk Damnit! Jesus skreeonk Christ!” Klaus smiled as he had his arms crossed and said, “How do you like me now?”

Ironically, saying God's name in vain actually is a sin...so yeah, Klaus didn't really improve his position in Hell by yelling that.

As a whole, I felt Season 2 was good, though the last chapter was pretty dark in comparison to the rest and Klaus's vision may've given away too much about Season 3. One common thing I see throughout the writing is that whenever somebody talks, you always say who is speaking. That's not necessary in certain 1 on 1 situations (like when Klaus is talking to the Devil). It's not a huge problem--it's not one at all--but just consider it in Season 3. Otherwise, great work. And you can kill my character if you want in Season 3...I need a change of pace anyways.

Glad you the like the chapter dude and don't worry your time will come and so will everyone else's time will come. Its only a matter of time before all hell brakes loose.

If you are referring to actual hell, then you must pay me $25, otherwise you must use a fake hell. Real hell is owned by Persephone, who is my property...

J/K! Do whatever you wish... have fun!

[King Caesar]

One of these days, FK, there needs to be a Heaven vs Hell match. Somewhere, somehow.

[Flygon King]

Wait a second... Thou art a genious!

*Heads off to begin work on new match...*

[GodzillavsJason]

One of these days, FK, there needs to be a Heaven vs Hell match. Somewhere, somehow.

dude we all know how this ends..... I don't know how it ends.