Exitium Discussion

[King Caesar]

There's always that one idiot on every team that just has to get attacked. What a clichè. Great job, Gojira. And beautiful work on my character. I'm such a badass.

[Gojira21]

Lol yea, i have to have atleast one cliche! and your welcome and your character will only get better he becomes a pretty big character in the story...hence remember he said he has a "debt" lol

@Kikomia thanks man, its good to be back and your character will get his fair share of zombie killings lol

[King Caesar]

Lol yea, i have to have atleast one cliche! and your welcome and your character will only get better he becomes a pretty big character in the story...hence remember he said he has a "debt" lol

Ah, I love foreshadowing! And great description btw. I forgot to mention that in the first comment.

[Gojira21]

Yes, but the 'Debt' is not directly connected with the actually plot of the story or not in this one;)...but it winds up becoming pretty important later down the line and thanks, im trying to get better at that lol and think im doing decent job

[King Caesar]

You are. This is probably one of the better Fan Fics that's in progress right now.

*looks around casually* New Fan Fic from me coming soon! Woo! *Silently walks away*

[Gojira21]

Why thank you KC lol and so have new fic coming soon huh? well ill just have to step my game up

[Gojira21]

And Chp5 part 2 is now up!

[King Caesar]

Bad news: Briggs died

Good news: He didn't get eaten to death. He just bled out.

I don't think I could even begin to imagine a worse death than being eaten alive by the undead. It's truly one of the worst deaths that exists. Anyways, great work as usual!

[Flygon King]

Believe me, there are worst ways to go... Like pissing off your girlfriend who happens to be the Goddess of Heaven... Just let that sink in for a moment...

Anyways, Chapter 5 was good... Briggs dying was an unfortunate event, but it's okay, he'll be back as one of the undead... Keep up the good work! I expect great things from Chapter 6...

[Gojira21]

Thats a good point, lol Briggs did get off easy...but...his dead corpse might make an appearence later in the story, who knows!!...and never said no-one wouldnt get eating alive...>_> but thank you for the review!

@Flygon That actually does sound pretty bad o_O but thank you also and well Chp6 is sort of dull but Chp 7 gets a lot better

[King Caesar]

*Thinks of pissing off the Queen of Hell* ....... *shrugs* She's can't stop my heavenly powers! Ha-cha!

[Flygon King]

Persephone:... Amusing, but I won't even bother trying. I have an arena to oversee, and a story that a certain lazy man needs to get back to writing...

GAAAH! That looks a little too much like the Burger King...

[Gojira21]

haha it does lol but why not chill in the FanFic fourm its a cool place to kick it

[Gojira21]

Chp 6 is up! its little shorter than the others, and little dull but it suffices

[King Caesar]

Ah, now Zach has entered the story. Good, good...but it needs more Cesar. Jk jk you do whatever you want. Great work.

[Gojira21]

I have already been in it techincally, lol im just now interacting with the other charcters haha and actually Cesar is in the next chapter so there ya go

[Gojira21]

Add Chapter 7! SO read it! and notice the Edgar Allen Poe refference at the end of the story..could it be a little bit of foreshadowing!!?? or a coincedence? lol stay tuned

and speaking of foreshadowing, back in chp 4 there is a small hint at it...there first person who can correctly figure it out PM me and i might give you little bit of inside peak at what lays ahead in the story@!

[Flygon King]

Not that I'm intrested or anything, but as far as I can guess, it involves Wens... and just who, or what, he is...

[Gojira21]

haha actually good guess...because in a way...it..."Clmaps mouth shut"

[King Caesar]

^ Don't you ruin the story for me!

Great work. And you wouldn't believe what my favorite part of chapter seven is...my part! lol good job, Gojira.