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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Wed May 23, 2012 2:55 am

I must say, I did not see that coming. Interesting twist, G21. The virus should've been called V-8 just for shits and giggles. :B
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed May 23, 2012 6:18 am

Thank you, im glad to see my little twist was unseen by everyone...lol ive tried to throw in subtle hints through out the story of somone being a trator and such but guess no-one picked up on it. Eh, i guess i should have lol ohwell, maybe for the sequel ;)
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed May 23, 2012 1:55 pm

Chp 18 is up! Im moving through this quite nicely know as i know exactly how i want to work this all out. Its a little shorter than all others, but there are few more things through out that cause for of a spin on things! 8-) enjoy!
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Flygon King » Wed May 23, 2012 2:12 pm

Wait a second... WAIT A BLOODY SECOND! YOU mean to tell me, that Kanna and Wens are-

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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed May 23, 2012 2:20 pm

Jaxon ignores his pleasantness “no time Kiko we have to get moving that bastard Kiko is a traitor!”

“That figures, I always had my doubts about his character,” said Kiko.


Wait Kiko has two split personalities? WTF?

But anyways great chapter and can't wait to see the fight between Jaxon and Theo
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed May 23, 2012 2:36 pm

Ah i meant Theo!!! -_-...haha whoa Flygon, they are brother and sister!!!....
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu May 24, 2012 1:44 pm

And Chp 19 is up! One more chapter left! plus the epilouge lol This last Chapter is going to be one action packed extravaganza!!! 8-)
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby kikomia » Thu May 24, 2012 1:45 pm

I hope we go out before it explodes...
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu May 24, 2012 1:48 pm

On im sure you all will oh and Kikomia...your character is heavly involved in the action in the last chapter 8-)
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Flygon King » Thu May 24, 2012 2:11 pm

Traitors get nom'd. Justice is served, Zombie-style...
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu May 24, 2012 2:18 pm

Yeap best way to it...although the thing that killed Theo was not quite a zombie
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Fri May 25, 2012 2:16 am

I wear my sunglasses because my eyes are light-sensitive! Gosh! :P

Good job. It looks like things are really heating up now.
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri May 25, 2012 7:06 am

Thank you, and yes things are...just wait for the next chapter
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Fri May 25, 2012 7:11 am

Wait?! You expect me to wait?! What kind of bullshit is this?!!

...I'll wait.
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri May 25, 2012 7:21 am

Lol well you dont have to wait, its up to you but either way...the next chapter not coming out in a flash
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri May 25, 2012 5:28 pm

Nice chapter dude and I like fight between Jaxon and Theo. Plus the sacrfice of Thomas was cool
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri May 25, 2012 5:47 pm

Yeap, thank you 8-) glad you enjoyed! as ive said before the next chapter will be full of action
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Sun May 27, 2012 5:13 pm

Ok the last chapter of Exitium is up! This is the longest chapter of the story and perhaps the longests chapter i have ever written actually...lol

But what is this? A cliff hanger? What will happen to our heroes?...Well you will just have to wait for the sequel 8-)
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Flygon King » Sun May 27, 2012 6:23 pm

What will be the fate of our heroes? Was Kanna left behind in the vaporized city, or did she make it out as well, and was that ugly monster really Nemesis's long lost sister?

Tune in next time, for Dragon Ball Z-erm i mean Exitium...
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Sun May 27, 2012 6:27 pm

Well actually Flygon, Kanna is one the chopper so she did escape...everything else sister huh? haha nice one

UPDATE: I actually forgot to mention that their is an Epilogue ill be adding to the story probably tommorrow. I wont be starting on Mortius for a few days, im going to relax from writting lol
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