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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Sun May 13, 2012 6:44 am

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Good chapter, 21. That last bit was pretty tense.
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Sun May 13, 2012 4:13 pm

haha he does dosent he? Lol and thank ya and it will probably be little more tense from here on out in the story
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Mon May 14, 2012 3:32 pm

Chp 14 is up! sort of short but is more tension lol enjoy
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Tue May 15, 2012 4:39 am

That was good. Gripping, suspenseful, and descriptive. Me gusta.
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Tue May 15, 2012 8:00 am

Thank you, glad you enjoyed
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed May 16, 2012 1:26 pm

And the next Chapter is up, only a few more left now
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed May 16, 2012 3:22 pm

Those are some nice new chapters, keep up dude and I can't wait to see how this ends.
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Wed May 16, 2012 3:29 pm

Thank you, well ill tell you the end probably wont be anything spectacular but we shall see lol
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby kikomia » Thu May 17, 2012 2:18 am

A few chapters left? Hell yeah! I can't wait to see how this ends.
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu May 17, 2012 6:53 am

Lol yeap, and in the next chapter there going ot be A LOT of stuff answered so stay tuned 8-)
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu May 17, 2012 1:20 pm

Next chapter it ups as it will be a two parter as it is important! Mystery will be answered and new ones will arise 8-) enjoy!
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Flygon King » Thu May 17, 2012 1:45 pm

Oh good grevious... those poor souls don't know what they're dealing wi-

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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu May 17, 2012 2:19 pm

Kanna got your tongue? lol
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby King Caesar » Fri May 18, 2012 6:58 am

Read the first new part. It looks like Parker is down and out. Bummer. Lol good job, but I will say the narration seems to be more of a stream of conscious rather than traditional narration. I don't know of it was intentional; I just thought I should point it out.
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri May 18, 2012 1:05 pm

Yeap, and there is more deaths to come...ah yea ive noticed that, its a rather tacky habbit i have-_- lol thanks for pointing it out thought
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Sun May 20, 2012 12:57 pm

Part 2 is up! Now i did not get into of the big reveal on answering stuff as that last bit dragged outlonger than i had thought BUT Chp 17 is all about answers! which will probably be up shortly alsol
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun May 20, 2012 1:03 pm

Nice chapter dude and finally the gang is all here! I'm having cravings for more! :mrgreen:
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Sun May 20, 2012 1:07 pm

Ahh not yet! There is still Kiko and KC group out there!! lol but dont worry they will be joing them soon enough, and oh there be more soon:)
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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Flygon King » Sun May 20, 2012 1:33 pm

Teaming up with Kanna might seem like a good idea... but is it?

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Re: Exitium Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Sun May 20, 2012 1:46 pm

Hmmm...only time will tell Flygon lol
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