Toho Kingdom

Here, you al can talk about SotA, and feel free to give comments, suggestions, and reviews. Truth be told, this was actully a collaborative work between me and an old friend of mine. He and I worked together to make this story for one Site in particular, and I'm editing some stuff in it for release here...

I like this...and that beginning was awesome with Fiore--I mean, Persephone. Can't wait to see where this goes now.

Woah..... that was awesome! I really enjoyed reading that and its at a very good start! Keep up the good work!

Chapter 2 is up! Releases for further chapters will correspond with those on the other forum. In other words, everytime my pal Giratina updates the story, I'll edit an earlier chapter and put it up here! This means that updates more or less depend on his side of the work, and since he tends to be a lazy bit*h...

Lol a llama saved the day. ^_^ If this had just a little more figurative language, this would definitely be a top-notch fan Fic.

That was AWESOME! Can't wait for more.

Not trying to be an ad-bot, but Tim85's Justice League Fan Fiction is pretty solid. Give it a look if you haven't.

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King Caesar wrote:Not trying to be an ad-bot, but Tim85's Justice League Fan Fiction is pretty solid. Give it a look if you haven't.

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King Caesar you're really an ad-bot. but on topic i've read your chapter last night but i haven't gotten a chance to reply and really good i like it alot keep up the good work!

Last "Freebie" chapter, Chapter 3, is up. From here on out, updates will correspond ith the original's updates as well... I don't want this release to overtake the release of the original...

Oh man Arceus is dead!

Arceus may be dead... but it wouldn't be the first time this happened.

Positive reviews... Just the thing I know Gira would LOVE to see...

Seeing as Gira's gone through the first half of Chapter 8 already, I've decided to put up the first half of Chapter 4. Please note that this fanfict combines alot of things, like Arceus and the Jewel of Life, as well as some other stuff from other universes...

Really awesome chapters dude espically the newest one with the legendaries. I liked how you made them all talk and have a personality.

Dude, Manaphy is the "Prince of the Sea" and is not female. And Arceus "created" eggs, he didn't lay them. He IS male. But the chapter was awesome

Mogu, pay closer attention., especially to the foreward. And as for Manaphy... Don't question me on it. I was't theone to write this... my pal Gira was. If you have any complaints, tell them to HIM, not me.

And more positive feedback... how nice!

...And while Gira's being a lazy ass and not uploading any new chapters, I decided to sneak on an edited chapter up here! Enjoy!

...AND ONCE AGAIN, GIRA'S TOO LAZY TO DO ANYTHING RIGHT!

So I took the honors of fixing up a few minor errors and putting up Chapter 6... Enjoy, ladies and gentlemen, here, the backstory ends, and the true story begins...

I WISH I COULD ALWAYS TALK IN CAP LOCKS LIKE ARCEUS!!

But good job. I liked the dialogue, and nice ending. I knows a Pokemon gonna get some tonight! Hahaha!!

Ending? When did I ever say this was the end of the story? Things are going to take a turn for the worst very soon... I can ensure that.

Gotcha. Well, best of luck to ya!

Chapter 7 is up, and the wheels of fate begin to spin....