JLA: Planet Kaiju Discussion Thread

[Tim85]

“Diana,” said Canary on the com link, “You two can come back in now.” The two of them entered the room a few minutes later. They noticed that Diana's lipstick was messed up and Tim's lips were the same color as Diana's and he walked with a slight stagger. The Leaguers exchanged glanced but didn't say anything when they sat down.

You did it! You horny son of a bitch!

This was awesome. It was comical, but not over the top, and had some good romantic scenes. The rating on this FF just shot up to a PG-13.

That's why I left that part up to interpretation. I like adding some humor, it lightens the mood.

Well, put yourself in her shoes. What if the person you loved the most was thought to be dead and then came back alright? You'd be so happy that you'd want to screw their brains out as well.

Anyway, this one's PG-13? You really need to read "War of the Kaiju" my friend. In the end, I don't leave it up to interpretation. It says that they do the deed.

[King Caesar]

They did the deed...man, that'd sure be something to brag about.

"Guys, I just had sex with Wonder Woman!"

...oh yeah, that would be for sure.

[Tim85]

They did the deed...man, that'd sure be something to brag about.

"Guys, I just had sex with Wonder Woman!"

...oh yeah, that would be for sure.

Hell yeah that would be something to brag about.

Actually the way I had it was that after two leave the room Diana pins him in a corner and furiously makes out with him. In the heat of the moment, they almost get it on when Black Canary calls them in. That is why they go to the Watchtower's training room afterwards, to take care of that urge.

[Tim85]

Chapter 4 is up!

Sorry if it's so soon. With the discussion going on about Tim and Diana, I wanted to get this one up since it continues showing their relationship.

The two Leagues are now one. I know that speech was a little corny but it was to show that I'll start referring to them as the Justice League instead of constantly calling them the JLA and the JLM.

I wanted to show some conflict between the groups so Kiryu and Red Arrow will be at each others throats.

[King Caesar]

Phew, for a moment I thought it was about to get nasty, but instead you kept it safe and gave a little more of a sweeter touch. That was good. Not every chapter needs a bang-bang. I liked how you executed the disagreements between the monsters and the human JL. Overall it was solid. Keep it up, and maybe somebody will be nice enough to check it out!

[Tim85]

Phew, for a moment I thought it was about to get nasty, but instead you kept it safe and gave a little more of a sweeter touch. That was good. Not every chapter needs a bang-bang. I liked how you executed the disagreements between the monsters and the human JL. Overall it was solid. Keep it up, and maybe somebody will be nice enough to check it out!

It does get annoying when you see all the views and no one comments (present company excluded of course. ). I asked Godzillavs.Jason and he said he'd check it out. I'm just not sure who to ask to check it out.

I couldn't resist the Round 2 comment. The whole scene almost builds up to it until she sees him asleep.

Glad you like the disagreements. I wanted to show some kind of conflict between the two groups because we all know with that many in the room there are bound to be arguements.

[King Caesar]

Yeah, characters that always agree with each other aren't fun to read about. This stirs it up a little bit.

And I really don't know who to ask about your FF...maybe Saw-U-In-1/2 would be interested.

[gigandude]

i read i just dont comment i loved war of the kaiju and im loving the sequel(cant spell as always T-T)

[Tim85]

Chapter 5 is up! The first big JL vs. SS fight.

Just as Kaiju gets Wonder Woman back in his life, she's snatched away.

Full disclosure: I used the portal idea from the 80's TMNT show, I just liked the idea instead of simply teleporting in. And the idea of Zilla and Gyaos as GMK Godzilla's personal servents just came to me, no real reason behind it.

[King Caesar]

Damn...no King Caesar

Lol jk this was terrific! Great approach at the battle scene; it did a good job of emphasizing the chaotic state.

[Tim85]

Damn...no King Caesar

Lol jk this was terrific! Great approach at the battle scene; it did a good job of emphasizing the chaotic state.

Not yet anyway.

Also wanted to pass it on that I won't be posting as quick as I am now because I'm still typing it up. Be patient!

[Tim85]

Chapter 6 is up!

Again, I don't know why, but I thought Godzilla Tower would be perfect for the hideout for the Secret Society.

I just Batman scaring a monster would be hilarious.

Wow, Tim has a short fuse, doesn't he?

[gigandude]

O_O-read the batman gabara part a few times-what did bats do to gabara im now going to stop disrespecting batsy form now on xD and great chapter

[Flygon King]

...Why is it that I always imagine Gabara having the voice of his TK Toons incarnation?

But aside from that, great chapter.... I imagine tatBatsy gave Gabara what he did to the Joker in TDK...

[King Caesar]

So...kaiju that transfer between their dimension and earth grow in size? Because, in theory, humans and kaiju have the same size in the JLM universe, so why is it that monsters are bigger in our world?

Awesome interrogation scene. Loved how Batman is stone cold...it's devilishly fun.

[Tim85]

I'm loving that everybody's getting a kick out of the Batman scaring Gabara scene. What's your opinion on the whole Kiryu/Red Arrow back and forth?

So...kaiju that transfer between their dimension and earth grow in size? Because, in theory, humans and kaiju have the same size in the JLM universe, so why is it that monsters are bigger in our world?

Awesome interrogation scene. Loved how Batman is stone cold...it's devilishly fun.

Here's how I describe it: On Earth-K, giant monsters have replaced humans as the dominent beings of the planet, but there are smaller human sized monsters. On the JLA Earth, humans, of course are the dominent beings but giant monsters are still persieved(sp?) as bigger then humans. The reason for the JLA being the same size as the monsters on Earth-K is the whole dominent being thing. Confused? So am I. But truth be told, I just go with the story: something with the dimensional travel causes the humans to be the same size as the monsters on Earth-K and the monsters are bigger then humans on JLA Earth. I just made it up so I can have the JLA team up with the JLM.

Your wish has come true KC. People are posting comments.

...Why is it that I always imagine Gabara having the voice of his TK Toons incarnation?

Again, full disclosure: so do I. Just curious Flygon King, what did you think of "War of the Kaiju"?

[Tim85]

Chapter 7 is up!

I don't have the next chapter typed up yet. And I don't know when I'll get it done so please be patient.

This chapter gives a little insight to the Secret Society. I thought the internalization of the M-base on Wonder Woman would further show how much the GMK Godzilla wants revenge against Kaiju.

Catch a breather now because this is the last "calm" chapter for awhile.

Glad everyone's enjoying this.

[King Caesar]

I'm sorry when I saw Monster X all I could think of was the Toho Toon version of him.

Great new part. You did a good job of capturing Godzilla's sick and brutal intentions.

[Tim85]

I'm sorry when I saw Monster X all I could think of was the Toho Toon version of him.

Great new part. You did a good job of capturing Godzilla's sick and brutal intentions.

Truthfully, so did I.

Give me a couple of days to get the next chapter up. The past two days have been hell and I haven't touched it.

[Tim85]

Chapter 8 is up!

Thank you all for the patience! I hope this chapter is worth the wait.

This chapter is the start of the big climax, I hope you're ready.

The code has a very special meaning: my birthday.

Red Arrow and Kiryu finally see eye to eye on something.

How did you like the twist at the very end? M. Night Shaymalon (sp?) eat your heart out.