Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

[GodzillavsJason]

Wow you guys are kinda acting like its the end of the world. but don't worry guys i might work on the next chapter later though but that depends because im going to work on Transformers 4 Reconstruction and life at tk city.

[GodzillavsJason]

New chapter is up! I hope you all like it and i know its probably terrible so be honest on this.

[kikomia]

Orga roared in pain but he was beginning to heal his wounds while Godzilla punched Razin in the face and fired an atomic ray into the green razored blade creature’s stomach. The result left a hole in Razin’s stomach

So he is dead right?

Godzilla grabbed Razin’s insides and ripped them out.

So he is dead now right?

Godzilla then wrapped Razin’s intestines around Razin’s neck and began to choke him.

Why isnt he dead?

Razin began chocking to death and soon he was dead.

Oh he died from the chocking? That doesnt even make sense.

[King Caesar]

Good thing I'm not an Orga fan boy...I'd be more than pissed off by his death.

Anyways, I'm curious. How do you separate paragraphs on battle scenes? It seems spontaneous and random...

[GodzillavsJason]

Good thing I'm not an Orga fan boy...I'd be more than pissed off by his death.

Anyways, I'm curious. How do you separate paragraphs on battle scenes? It seems spontaneous and random...

uh... uh... uh... Hey look Chipmunk! *Quickly runs off*


thanks im glad you liked it

[GodzillavsJason]

New Chapter is up! I hope you all like it!

[King Caesar]

You know what'd really suck? If Dogolas's hearts were in another passage in his body. Because think about it...they just chose one hole. He could have others, right? And they're just assuming it's the right one...

...nitpick...

[kikomia]

Just read it. Nice approach on the final fight

[GodzillavsJason]

You know what'd really suck? If Dogolas's hearts were in another passage in his body. Because think about it...they just chose one hole. He could have others, right? And they're just assuming it's the right one...

...nitpick...

well the part they went into had different passage ways so who knows what they can enccounter in here.

@Kikomia Thanks dude im glad you liked it

[King Caesar]

No, I mean like another passage on the outside, not through the hole they went through. Maybe there's some other passage?

[GodzillavsJason]

No, I mean like another passage on the outside, not through the hole they went through. Maybe there's some other passage?

maybe? Maybe not. we'll just have to see what happens from here on there.

[King Caesar]

I could just see it now...

"You hear that?" Godzilla asked. There was a low rumble...

"Oh no!" Anguiras began to run away. "We're in his intestines!!!"

The feces will fly.

[GodzillavsJason]

I could just see it now...

"You hear that?" Godzilla asked. There was a low rumble...

"Oh no!" Anguirus began to run away. "We're in his intestines!!!"

The feces will fly.

fixed! yeah but they wont go into his instetines they'll just work their way up to the two hearts. it will be good.

[King Caesar]

What did you fix?

Oh, and I can't wait for the shit to hit the fan [UCWUTIDIDTHERElolol]

[GodzillavsJason]

What did you fix?

Oh, and I can't wait for the shit to hit the fan [UCWUTIDIDTHERElolol]

you put in a in Angurius so i put a u in there! don't worry little lion everything will just be okay.

[GodzillavsJason]

New Chapter is up! I hope you all like it!

[MothraRocks]

Pretty interesting, I want more!!

[GodzillavsJason]

Pretty interesting, I want more!!

thanks dude im glad you liked it and you'll get more for yo hungry bellies.

[King Caesar]

Good There's a lot happening in this, so it may be good to focus on what you haven't brushed on too much *cough*Space Armada vs Dogolos!

[GodzillavsJason]

Good There's a lot happening in this, so it may be good to focus on what you haven't brushed on too much *cough*Space Armada vs Dogolos!

thanks dude im glad you liked it and this next chapter should be be a bit longer but im gonna try and put mor of the space armada part.