GodzillavsJason wrote:Orga roared in pain but he was beginning to heal his wounds while Godzilla punched Razin in the face and fired an atomic ray into the green razored blade creature’s stomach. The result left a hole in Razin’s stomach
GodzillavsJason wrote:Godzilla grabbed Razin’s insides and ripped them out.
GodzillavsJason wrote:Godzilla then wrapped Razin’s intestines around Razin’s neck and began to choke him.
GodzillavsJason wrote:Razin began chocking to death and soon he was dead.
SuperSaiyan4Godzilla wrote:wataru wrote:It's not huge and it's white.
LIKE YO DICK!
King Caesar wrote:Good thing I'm not an Orga fan boy...I'd be more than pissed off by his death.
Anyways, I'm curious. How do you separate paragraphs on battle scenes? It seems spontaneous and random...
King Caesar wrote:You know what'd really suck? If Dogolas's hearts were in another passage in his body. Because think about it...they just chose one hole. He could have others, right? And they're just assuming it's the right one...
King Caesar wrote:No, I mean like another passage on the outside, not through the hole they went through. Maybe there's some other passage?
King Caesar wrote:I could just see it now...
"You hear that?" Godzilla asked. There was a low rumble...
"Oh no!" Anguirus began to run away. "We're in his intestines!!!"
The feces will fly.
King Caesar wrote:What did you fix?
Oh, and I can't wait for the shit to hit the fan [UCWUTIDIDTHERElolol]
MothraRocks wrote:Pretty interesting, I want more!!
King Caesar wrote:Good There's a lot happening in this, so it may be good to focus on what you haven't brushed on too much *cough*Space Armada vs Dogolos!
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