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Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Mon Sep 26, 2011 8:06 pm

WARNING DO NOT READ THIS UNTIL YOU"VE READ THE ARRIVAL AND THE TRAILER!

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suggestions are welcome :mrgreen: so please disscuss
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Godzillafan642 » Mon Sep 26, 2011 8:18 pm

So are scopic the monster he was with & miki & manda dead
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Mon Sep 26, 2011 8:19 pm

Godzillafan642 wrote:So are scopic the monster he was with & miki & manda dead


when did i ever say they were dead? ;) who knows they could be dead or alive. only time can tell and i know the answer of course :)
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Alucard » Tue Sep 27, 2011 2:21 am

Wow you we done all of them in a fast time :lol:
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Kubo » Tue Sep 27, 2011 2:37 am

Hmmm...I feel the human plot outside of the military effort is totally useless in this. They really didn't serve much of a purpose in the Arrival, and I doubt they will now. But I'm still excited nonetheless.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Sep 27, 2011 5:47 am

King Caesar wrote:Hmmm...I feel the human plot outside of the military effort is totally useless in this. They really didn't serve much of a purpose in the Arrival, and I doubt they will now. But I'm still excited nonetheless.


well Dr.Mafune will atleast some sort of a purpose while Akane and Yuri will be there in and out but yeah im focusin on what we want it to be.... MONSTERS! :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Sep 27, 2011 5:03 pm

Prolouge is up! I hope you all like it! :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Sep 27, 2011 8:14 pm

New Chapter is up! I hope you all like it! :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Alucard » Tue Sep 27, 2011 11:02 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:Angurius walked over to Balkzardan and gave her a kiss while Balkzardan smiled.


This bothers me. How can Anguirus kiss Balkzardan when he doesnt even have lips?

The rest of it is good for a start.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Godzillafan642 » Wed Sep 28, 2011 12:16 am

All right tell who made that robot ape steal jr's body & where his base is so i can blow his brains out.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Kubo » Wed Sep 28, 2011 2:21 am

kikomia wrote:
GodzillavsJason wrote:Angurius walked over to Balkzardan and gave her a kiss while Balkzardan smiled.


This bothers me. How can Anguirus kiss Balkzardan when he doesnt even have lips?

The rest of it is good for a start.


What irked me even more than that is that scene was basically the exact same as the last one, even their conversation with each other. I sense a lack of creativity!!! :P

Pretty cool chapters. There's a shit-load of monsters though...gosh there's a lot. But hey, KC is in it, so KC is content.
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Sep 28, 2011 6:19 am

Hey King Caesar Pssh! Psssh! Pssh! Hey i have four of your favorite monsters in it. :mrgreen: also thanks guys im glad you liked it also i think Revelations might be a short story but who knows it might be longer but i'll just see how it plays out. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Kubo » Wed Sep 28, 2011 10:00 am

Hey King Caesar Pssh! Psssh! Pssh! Hey i have four of your favorite monsters in it


Yeah, yeah...I just wish you had my other two favorites, but that'll have to wait. :P
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Sep 28, 2011 2:17 pm

King Caesar wrote:
Hey King Caesar Pssh! Psssh! Pssh! Hey i have four of your favorite monsters in it


Yeah, yeah...I just wish you had my other two favorites, but that'll have to wait. :P


and what are those other two?
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Kubo » Wed Sep 28, 2011 2:20 pm

Grost from Ultraman Taroh and Gelbile from Planet Woo.

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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Sep 28, 2011 2:21 pm

King Caesar wrote:Grost from Ultraman Taroh and Gelbile from Planet Woo.


well techincally Grost is in my franchise.... IF MOTHRAROCKS WOULD JUST HURRY UP AND WRITE BANDIT PLANTS AND ICE MINI SERIES ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!! :P
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Godzillafan642 » Wed Sep 28, 2011 4:05 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:
King Caesar wrote:Grost from Ultraman Taroh and Gelbile from Planet Woo.


well techincally Grost is in my franchise.... IF MOTHRAROCKS WOULD JUST HURRY UP AND WRITE BANDIT PLANTS AND ICE MINI SERIES ALREADY!!!!!!!!!!!! :P

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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Sep 28, 2011 4:11 pm

thanks lol also just asking you all right now. what is your favorite to least favorite of my fan fics so far? you can include Finding the past as well so please place all of them in the order of your favorite to least favorite. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Godzillafan642 » Wed Sep 28, 2011 4:34 pm

I now must leave toho kingdom forums i will only return if you ever need to be tought the ways of toho good bye now. ;) :mudkip: :tk:
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Re: Godzilla: Revelations Disscussion Board

Postby Kubo » Wed Sep 28, 2011 4:36 pm

._. Uh...nice knowin' ya, Godzillafan642. Hope you have a good and productive life outside of this black hole of a forum.
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