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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sat Sep 24, 2011 12:22 pm

Well you can bet you're bottom dollar I'll be here to read it! ;)
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby kikomia » Sat Sep 24, 2011 1:28 pm

Nice new chapters :D
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 24, 2011 3:42 pm

New Chapter is up! I hope you all like it! :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby Flygon King » Sat Sep 24, 2011 4:15 pm

Yes... this story is coming together quite nicely... very nicely indeed...
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby MothraRocks » Sat Sep 24, 2011 4:55 pm

Liking the new chapter :D Doglas is awesome. Oh....





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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 24, 2011 4:57 pm

MothraRocks wrote:Liking the new chapter :D Doglas is awesome. Oh....





MOTHRA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

!!!!!!!!111!!!!!!


Thanks dude im glad you liked it :mrgreen: Also Doglas is awesome and what did you think of King Ghidorah and some of the others' forms. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby MothraRocks » Sat Sep 24, 2011 5:00 pm

I think it's funny he and his other forms simply fight, but Keizer is a jerk :mad:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 24, 2011 5:02 pm

MothraRocks wrote:I think it's funny he and his other forms simply fight, but Keizer is a jerk :mad:


yep that Keizer is a jerk lol. also just a little spoiler that you'll all most likely guessed is that next chapter is just basically a small little civil war. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby MothraRocks » Sat Sep 24, 2011 5:03 pm

Lol, yeah, I knew that already :P
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Sat Sep 24, 2011 5:38 pm

like the new chapter and the reversed MKG :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 24, 2011 5:41 pm

GodzillavsZilla wrote:like the new chapter and the reversed MKG :mrgreen:


thanks dude im glad you liked it and yeah i thought of the reversed MKG would be better. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:25 pm

Dogolas roared out “These three shall be known as Sharklock (Formally Bemstar), Peluda (Formally Destro King), and Hot Ice (Formally Bagorah). These three shall be the three of the lesser powerful of your new warriors.”


Why--why on earth would Dogolos, assuming he can transform monsters, ever make three inferior monsters?! What kinda logic does that sick monster tick to?! :P

Cool, cool Needlar is still around. Keizer Ghidorah better get what's coming to him. You'd think he'd show a little respect for the monster that resurrected him!
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:29 pm

King Caesar wrote:
Dogolas roared out “These three shall be known as Sharklock (Formally Bemstar), Peluda (Formally Destro King), and Hot Ice (Formally Bagorah). These three shall be the three of the lesser powerful of your new warriors.”


Why--why on earth would Dogolos, assuming he can transform monsters, ever make three inferior monsters?! What kinda logic does that sick monster tick to?! :P

Cool, cool Needlar is still around. Keizer Ghidorah better get what's coming to him. You'd think he'd show a little respect for the monster that resurrected him!



uh hmmm! You are to call Nedlar now as Knifes! :P but im glad you liked it :mrgreen: also maybe Dogolas just doesn't want to spend alot of money on his new warriors as he only has a limited amount of money because he has a wife and 3 kids and he has to save money for gas :P
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:32 pm

Damn this economic recession...it's even affecting our Fan Fictions!! :shock:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 24, 2011 9:35 pm

King Caesar wrote:Damn this economic recession...it's even affecting our Fan Fictions!! :shock:


yeah its even terrible because i can only give the main monsters like a million dollars each (Godzilla, King Ghidorah/MKG, Angurius, Balkzardan, Mothra Leo, Mothra, Needlar/Knifes, Zandolla, Spider-Uros, Dogolas, Mothra, Etc)

while i can give only 1 paco to the supporting monster (Red King, Kumonga, Goliath, Gigamoth, Manda, Etc and Keizer Ghidorah (Because hes a giant douchebag!) :P
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Sep 25, 2011 1:27 am

New Chapter is up! :mrgreen: I hope you all like it! :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:09 pm

I know i've been quoting a lot, but this one made me nearly laugh:
Though the ones that supported Keizer Ghidorah cheered while Keizer Ghidorah became the new leader as some of the others wished King Ghidorah were back as the leader (Red and Blue Flasher, Garoborg, Fire Ghidorah, Dark Ghidorah, Des Ghidorah, Telesdon, Saramandora, Razin, and Barugas)


So wait...all those monsters couldn't take down the weakest incarnation of Ghidorah and a couple of henchmen? Haha...good times. :P

Anyways, pretty cool. As always, I will provide you with some advice: Now that the bad guys have very unique abilities, emphasize on them. And I mean drive that son of a bitch home! Think of every possible strategy they could use, and also note any flaws for their death scenes. Trust me, that will make the battles epic-er.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby Godzillafan642 » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:12 pm

This lastest chapter is great its so good i loved it execpt the deaths in it you that is only thing i don't like about this story i don't like it when in a story it kills off new chatchers.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:14 pm

thanks dude im glad you liked it. also the minions couldn't do anything to Keizer Ghidorah because um.... its part of the story so they can't do anything about it :P :lol: anyways i will follow all those avices :mrgreen: also what do you think of the new forms of monsters? :mrgreen:

@Everybody ok one last announcement on this post there will only be like two more chapters of this story before this story is over then it hits to the six installment which i'm thinking i will call it Godzilla: Revelations or something like that but it will most likely be Revelations :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sun Sep 25, 2011 6:17 pm

Can't wait to see the 100+ monsters in it. ;) lol

Anyways, I thought Needlar's new form is awesome. He's just the way I like him, though his name seems a little...lackluster, I suppose. Killing Bemular was the highlight of the chapter though. Dang mofo deserved it!
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