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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Thu Sep 22, 2011 5:41 pm

King Caesar wrote:Awesome. Needlar. Is. Awesome. Actually, I'm impressed with all the Zone Fighter characters' portrayals. It's sharp.

Probably my favorite chapter yet.


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also next chapter might be up today. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Fri Sep 23, 2011 1:52 am

Awesome! :mrgreen: And Needlar didn't die. I liked it. Keizer Ghidorah sounds like he'll be the villain in the next one. ;)
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby Godzillafan642 » Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:03 am

So my gusse that seeing that this fanfic has going like the g1 transformers movie i think king ghidorah who be bought back as grand king ghidorah will kill monster x in one hit like gavatron killed starscream :( but so this fan fic is great aslo did dude seeing that soundwave is your favrtoie transformer did you cry when he was killed in dark of the moon
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:37 am

Or Ghidorah will just die and Zandolla will take over...maybe... ._.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby Godzillafan642 » Fri Sep 23, 2011 5:00 am

King Caesar wrote:Or Ghidorah will just die and Zandolla will take over...maybe... ._.

You just like zandolla so much the only way i see he being leader is if him made his own team.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Fri Sep 23, 2011 5:22 am

Which is plausible. If I really wanted this to go my way (which I would prefer it wouldn't, but...) I would want Needlar to go rogue. Thats just me though.

Oh my gawsh...we're arguing over an FF. What TF?!
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Sep 23, 2011 5:45 am

Thanks guys im glad you really liked it and you guys are arguing what will happen to King Ghidorah well it will happen after this next intermission chapter that i'll be finishing up when i get back from school. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Sep 23, 2011 3:48 pm

Two Intermission chapters are up and sorry that they were a bit short but i'll post a new chapter today and i hope you enjoy both of them! :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby MothraRocks » Fri Sep 23, 2011 6:01 pm

Nice new chapters man :huge:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sat Sep 24, 2011 4:11 am

Good. I liked the second one better (bittersweet endings are always pleasant to read). One complaint that has been building up for a while now is the use of the word "As". Find a different way to cobsteuct your sentences so you're not dependent on that word. Otherwise, it was great.
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Postby GodzillavsZilla » Sat Sep 24, 2011 7:05 am

awsome new chapters :mrgreen: , sad to see Godzilla's dead :(
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sat Sep 24, 2011 7:20 am

^ It's not canon! He's still alive. That was like a cut scene; it wasn't the actual ending. It was just an non-canon alternate.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 24, 2011 8:06 am

@everyone thanks guys im glad you liked those two little chapters and yes the one where Godzilla dies is not cannon as you can see wh it was cut later as somethings wouldn't have made sense if Godzilla died. :mrgreen:

PS Also sorry i coulden't get a new chapter up yesterday because its going to be a long and interesting chapter so yeah its going to be really good. :mrgreen:

@King Caesar ok i'll try stop using those damn as lol but what do you suggest what i should use moe then those as? :D
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sat Sep 24, 2011 11:12 am

Vary your sentence structure a little bit. Use different conjunctions such as "While", "Though", "Yet", "And", and "Or". Also consider some prepositional phrases like "On the other hand..." or "While ___ was ___, ...". A little sprucing up never hurt. :)
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 24, 2011 11:20 am

King Caesar wrote:Vary your sentence structure a little bit. Use different conjunctions such as "While", "Though", "Yet", "And", and "Or". Also consider some prepositional phrases like "On the other hand..." or "While ___ was ___, ...". A little sprucing up never hurt. :)


thanks dude those will be handy now when i get home im going to finish the rest of the chapter, read it and then post it. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby King Caesar » Sat Sep 24, 2011 12:22 pm

Well you can bet you're bottom dollar I'll be here to read it! ;)
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby kikomia » Sat Sep 24, 2011 1:28 pm

Nice new chapters :D
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 24, 2011 3:42 pm

New Chapter is up! I hope you all like it! :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby Flygon King » Sat Sep 24, 2011 4:15 pm

Yes... this story is coming together quite nicely... very nicely indeed...
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board

Postby MothraRocks » Sat Sep 24, 2011 4:55 pm

Liking the new chapter :D Doglas is awesome. Oh....





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