Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by King Caesar » Sat Sep 17, 2011 5:35 pm
*cough* Cameo appearance! */cough*
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 17, 2011 5:36 pm
King Caesar wrote:*cough* Cameo appearance! */cough*
hmm maybe he'll appear like that but who knows.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by MothraRocks » Sat Sep 17, 2011 5:38 pm
That would be pretty cool 
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by GodzillavsJason » Sat Sep 17, 2011 11:46 pm
Prolouge is up! I hope you all like it! 
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by King Caesar » Sun Sep 18, 2011 4:15 am
Kewl. I don't know if this is true or not, but the prologue in books usually is just some exposition to the story, not a critical plot point. It's not a huge deal or anything, but just a little FYI.
And hey, Red and Blue Flasher were a nice touch. ^_^
And hey, Red and Blue Flasher were a nice touch. ^_^
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by kikomia » Sun Sep 18, 2011 5:11 am
Yeshh.. The series is finally here.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by GodzillavsZilla » Sun Sep 18, 2011 5:22 am
awsome chapter, can't wait for Mothra to come
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by GodzillavsJason » Sun Sep 18, 2011 10:22 am
King Caesar wrote:Kewl. I don't know if this is true or not, but the prologue in books usually is just some exposition to the story, not a critical plot point. It's not a huge deal or anything, but just a little FYI.
And hey, Red and Blue Flasher were a nice touch. ^_^
yeah i think thats what a prologue is though but i just use them as a little explanation before the story kicks off and im glad you liked it.
@Everyone thanks guys im glad you liked it
also just a heads up Akane will have more of a role in this than Yuri will but don't worry Yuri will still be in it but Akane will be the main human.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by GodzillavsJason » Sun Sep 18, 2011 9:11 pm
New Chapter is up! I hope you all like it! also i hope you catch the tribute in there.
also i hope you catch the tribute in there. 52 wins and 27 loses
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by kikomia » Mon Sep 19, 2011 2:43 am
Nice job 
Like the idea with giving Akane physic powers
Like the idea with giving Akane physic powers
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by King Caesar » Mon Sep 19, 2011 3:01 am
GvJ in the story wrote:All of the sudden the helicopter moved a bit for a second as the chopper settle down for a bit. Akane then saw that it was Gigamoth flying back to Infant Island.
I was kinda confused by the first sentence there. Too many prepositional phrases...be careful about that next time. Cool chapter though, and I like the switch to novel dialogue...just make sure you don't capitalize when it's like "Yada-yada," said Bob. The only time you should is when it's like "Yada-yada." Bob stepped away. Notice it's only used when the not-quoted part is not relative to what is in the quotes. Keep that in mind...
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by GodzillavsJason » Mon Sep 19, 2011 5:49 am
Thanks guys im glad you liked it
@King Caesar thanks dude i'll keep that in mind.
so im assuming nobody noticed the tribute in the chapter?
@King Caesar thanks dude i'll keep that in mind.
so im assuming nobody noticed the tribute in the chapter?
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by kikomia » Mon Sep 19, 2011 5:50 am
No. What tribute?
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by GodzillavsJason » Mon Sep 19, 2011 5:52 am
kikomia wrote:No. What tribute?
well noticed when her room number said 2002 thats when Godzilla against Mechagodzilla got released and the character Akane was in the that film.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by kikomia » Mon Sep 19, 2011 5:54 am
Oh... Now i get it. But its to small of a tribute to be noticed by anyone 
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by GodzillavsJason » Mon Sep 19, 2011 5:55 am
kikomia wrote:Oh... Now i get it. But its to small of a tribute to be noticed by anyone
yep it sure is a midget tribute.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by kikomia » Mon Sep 19, 2011 5:56 am
Yay for midgets!!!
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by GodzillavsJason » Mon Sep 19, 2011 5:58 am
kikomia wrote:Yay for midgets!!!
i call chicken nuggets Chicken Midgets
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by kikomia » Mon Sep 19, 2011 5:58 am
GodzillavsJason wrote:kikomia wrote:Yay for midgets!!!
i call chicken nuggets Chicken Midgets
Do not insult my favourite McDonalds meal.
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Re: Godzilla: The Arrival Disscussion Board
by GodzillavsJason » Mon Sep 19, 2011 5:59 am
hey its not my fault that they are so small but lets stop spamming my thread.
but lets stop spamming my thread.52 wins and 27 loses
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You name the skreeonk baby after me.
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