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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Thu Jul 28, 2011 4:35 pm

Lol, nice man and yourwelcome
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:37 pm

It was okay though but you really need to add more to a story, maybe this is just a suggestion though but try aiming for about 500 words in your next chapter but other than that you left it at a cliffhanger. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:38 pm

I agree, but it was interesting, im betting an angurius and Godzilla fight!!
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:39 pm

i just exstended it, and yes ill try that, i most likley wont be able to but ill try

and the funny thing is yall always beat me to posting about a new chapter :D
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:44 pm

I liked it, good job
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:45 pm

Gojira21 wrote:I liked it, good job

thank you and im not really good with human scenes just to let you know
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:47 pm

Neither am it, dont worry
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:48 pm

k lol
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:49 pm

its okay dudes im okay with human scenes but we all have weakness in writing fan fics and stuff. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:50 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:its okay dudes im okay with human scenes but we all have weakness in writing fan fics and stuff. :mrgreen:

yeah and do yall have any suggestions
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:52 pm

Godzilla1703 wrote:
GodzillavsJason wrote:its okay dudes im okay with human scenes but we all have weakness in writing fan fics and stuff. :mrgreen:

yeah and do yall have any suggestions


how about you have Godzilla and Angurius become friends and have them fight Megalon and Mecha-Kong . :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:53 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:
Godzilla1703 wrote:
GodzillavsJason wrote:its okay dudes im okay with human scenes but we all have weakness in writing fan fics and stuff. :mrgreen:

yeah and do yall have any suggestions


how about you have Godzilla and Angurius become friends and have them fight Megalon and Mecha-Kong . :mrgreen:

mecha kong? most likely no to him but megalon probably and the 1st thing yes
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:53 pm

Well i say have angurius and Godzilla fight, with Godzilla winning. And have like the Xilliens follow the action, but maybe mayumi? can desiable the device and Godzilla be free!!
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:54 pm

Gojira21 wrote:Well i say have angurius and Godzilla fight, with Godzilla winning. And have like the Xilliens follow the action, but maybe mayumi? can desiable the device and Godzilla be free!!

SPOILER: she does that later
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Gojira21 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:55 pm

ooo...well hot damn im good 8-)
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 5:56 pm

Gojira21 wrote:ooo...well hot damn im good 8-)

lol
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:13 pm

new part is up, go check it out
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:14 pm

Godzilla1703 wrote:new part is up, go check it out


it was good dude. :mrgreen:
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby Godzilla1703 » Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:15 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:
Godzilla1703 wrote:new part is up, go check it out


it was good dude. :mrgreen:

thanks, was it long enough
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Re: Godzilla: The Evil Inside Series discussion & suggestion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Fri Jul 29, 2011 7:18 pm

Godzilla1703 wrote:
GodzillavsJason wrote:
Godzilla1703 wrote:new part is up, go check it out


it was good dude. :mrgreen:

thanks, was it long enough


well it has 283 words so yeah its long enough. :mrgreen:
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