The Rise of Godzilla series discussion

[King Caesar]

I've never heard "roared in pain" used so frequently before. Be careful not to repeat phrases as much in this next chapter

[MothraRocks]

It was an interesting chapter, but like KC said, u kinda over used the term 'roared in pain', and try to add a bit more description to the fights. Other than that, I thought it was good

五黄w押しゃをっ！

[GodzillavsJason]

It was an interesting chapter, but like KC said, u kinda over used the term 'roared in pain', and try to add a bit more description to the fights. Other than that, I thought it was good

五黄w押しゃをっ！

thanks for the tips guys also im glad you liked it. just 3 more chapters left.

[GodzillavsJason]

New chapter is up! hope you like it!

[MothraRocks]

It was good, but try to stick to one tense; you continually switched between past and present. Like how Leo was like " Told ya!" when Destroyah came XD

[GodzillavsJason]

It was good, but try to stick to one tense; you continually switched between past and present. Like how Leo was like " Told ya!" when Destroyah came XD

thanks for the tip, glad you liked it, also this is where the real war starts.

[MothraRocks]

Goody, I'm gonna love it, I'm sure

[GodzillavsJason]

Goody, I'm gonna love it, I'm sure

yep and prepare for some deaths in the fight which is probably going to be a bit sad.

[MothraRocks]

not deaths!!

[GodzillavsJason]

:( not deaths!!

yep and like i said this trilogy is going to be dark. also 2 more chapters left.

[MothraRocks]

I bet the next chapter is gonna be awesome, with the last one being the conclusion, right?

[GodzillavsJason]

I bet the next chapter is gonna be awesome, with the last one being the conclusion, right?

if you want to know then PM me because im not sure if anybody else wants to know how the final two chapters will be.

[King Caesar]

This last one was okay. Not great, not bad. I see some improvement since Chapter 1, but there's a long road ahead of you if you're gonna write more

[GodzillavsJason]

New chapter is up! Hope you like the final battle

[GodzillavsJason]

Sorry for double post but last chapter is done! hope you like it and it is a bit short.

[King Caesar]

Oh thank god Dean Devlin died. I waited twenty chapters just to see that. ^_^ Good job...

"on the roof on the roof..." <--You might want to fix that.

[MothraRocks]

That was a very satisfying ending good job GodzillavsJason!! Can't wait for the sequel!

[GodzillavsJason]

Thanks you guys im glad you liked it and now a fun facts list.

Biollante, Gororsarus, Battra, Hedorah, Kumonga, and Kamacuruas were suppose to be in the fan fic but there wasn't enough room for them in 20 chapters
Ebirah was suppose to have Kamoebas role but got changed at the last minute.
Originally the final battle was only suppose to be Godzilla, Angurius, Rodan, and Mothra(Heisei) fighting Destroyah * Note this was long before Mothrarocks won the contest and want Mothra Leo in*
Megalon was suppose to aid Destroyah in the final but was changed to battle in LA
Originally there was suppose to be a Female Baragon with little baby Baragons.
Originallty it was suppose to be Godzilla, Rodan, and Rainbow Mothra who was suppose to make the killing blow on Destroyah but Rodan was changed to Varan.
thats all the fun facts that i could think of i had planning on this.

[MothraRocks]

... So I picked Mothra Leo, hoping that would save mothra in your fanfic, but ironicilly I'm the reason she was killed?

[GodzillavsJason]

... So I picked Mothra Leo, hoping that would save mothra in your fanfic, but ironicilly I'm the reason she was killed?

even if you didn't pick Mothra Leo. Mothra (Heisei) Would still have died. also what did you think of the alliance with Godzilla and the other monsters.