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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Fri Aug 19, 2011 4:41 am

I might make the prequel to Mechabara, where Ebirah and Gabara fight Godzilla and Mothra, but we'll see how I feel. ;) Glad you like it.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby MothraRocks » Fri Aug 19, 2011 4:42 am

Hm, that sounds like an interesting prequel, if you make it, good luck!
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Fri Aug 19, 2011 5:10 am

Made a minor adjustment after realizing it wasn't chronologically correct. :P
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Fri Aug 19, 2011 5:11 am

Hmm i am thinking of reading all the chapters. Ill come back with a review :D
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Fri Aug 19, 2011 5:46 am

Found a thing that bothers
First:

King Caesar wrote:Ryu tried to save one of them, but a massive claw burst from the ground and took the poor guy away


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King Caesar wrote:"Great!" Koichi knocked over a organizer filled with various documents. "Rot in hell, King. I'm done here." Koichi stormed out of the room and met up with Ryu. They walked down a stairwell and outside into the cool autumn air.

"What did King say to you, Koichi?" Ryu asked.



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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Fri Aug 19, 2011 5:54 am

^ Bothers? *gasp* How so?
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Fri Aug 19, 2011 5:57 am

Well in the first scene it looks like he is dead. Then he appears again. Altough Koichi might have been high and has been hallucinating.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Fri Aug 19, 2011 6:01 am

Oh...shit.

Good eyes, kikomia. I totally did not see that when I was revising.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Fri Aug 19, 2011 6:04 am

No problem. I am here to help :D
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby KaijuDuke » Fri Aug 19, 2011 7:09 am

Sounds like a promising story in the making Caesar, but I've never thought of King Caesar as a bad guy monster but rather a defender of Japan & its people like in his original Showa era incarnation. For example, I honestly believe Caesar should have been Godzilla's final opponent in GMK instead of Ghidorah, as a Shisa beast Caesar would make an ideal guardian monster and is close enough in size to Godzilla to take him on directly (honestly hope to use Caesar in such a fashion in a fanfic someday lol).

P.S. on the off chance ya haven't thought of this idea already, I figure a good power for a modern King Caesar to have would be the ability to absorb energy attacks through his hide rather than his eyes and then fire the energy back at his opponent. Such an ability would allow ya to keep him a melee combatant mostly BUT give him a stronger defense against beam weapons. Alternatively, ya could just give him the ability to shoot lasers from his eyes at will like he does in the Godzilla video games instead, so he and Godzilla would be evenly matched in terms of both melee and ranged abilities and can exchange fire back and forth between tooth and claw battles.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Fri Aug 19, 2011 8:05 am

^I understand EXACTLY what you mean. And that is what you should be asking yourself. "Why is KC evil? I thought he was good?" That will all be explained at the end, but if you really want the answer, you should check out some Japanese mythology. It might clue you in. ;) And yeah, KC should have so been the last guy in GMK.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby KaijuDuke » Fri Aug 19, 2011 1:05 pm

King Caesar wrote:No-sir-ee Bob i have no intentions on doing that. Maybe in my next one ill have a whole bunch of people give me fan-made monsters.



If ya ever have a need for original kaiju ideas look me up! 8-)

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King Caesar wrote: ^I understand EXACTLY what you mean. And that is what you should be asking yourself. "Why is KC evil? I thought he was good?" That will all be explained at the end, but if you really want the answer, you should check out some Japanese mythology. It might clue you in. ;) And yeah, KC should have so been the last guy in GMK.



Cool, I'm intrigued now thats for sure, would you recommend I go back and read Mechabra before I read this next story though? or is it standalone?

And great minds think alike it seems :mrgreen:, Godzilla vs King Caesar must happen someday! :twisted:
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Fri Aug 19, 2011 2:57 pm

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King Caesar wrote:No-sir-ee Bob i have no intentions on doing that. Maybe in my next one ill have a whole bunch of people give me fan-made monsters.



If ya ever have a need for original kaiju ideas look me up! 8-)

"readies his monster maker in his evil underground basement lab" :twisted:


It'll be a fierce competition! You better impress me! :P

King Caesar wrote: ^I understand EXACTLY what you mean. And that is what you should be asking yourself. "Why is KC evil? I thought he was good?" That will all be explained at the end, but if you really want the answer, you should check out some Japanese mythology. It might clue you in. ;) And yeah, KC should have so been the last guy in GMK.



Cool, I'm intrigued now thats for sure, would you recommend I go back and read Mechabra before I read this next story though? or is it standalone?


The only reason may be to understand the situation with the three main guys (Ryu, Koichi, and Manny [who is coming in later on]) and the monsters that have oreviously been killed*, but that last one's minor.

And great minds think alike it seems :mrgreen:, Godzilla vs King Caesar must happen someday! :twisted:

Yes! Oh--a little bird just told me that there is another monster outside the already deceased zombies...it's a good guy...it's a lost project...it's a synonym for castle...with Asuka as the first name...

*In order of death: Anguiras, Ebirah, Varan, Titanosaurus, Mechabara. The blue ones were in the unwritten prequel to Mechabara.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Wed Aug 24, 2011 6:19 am

Dude you still havent edited it.

Is Ryu dead or not :P
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Wed Aug 24, 2011 4:53 pm

Would you cut me some slack?! :P geez I have bigger priorities than a little fix-it!
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Wed Aug 24, 2011 5:01 pm

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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Thu Aug 25, 2011 2:47 am

Fixed it. Happy?! -_- lol
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Thu Aug 25, 2011 5:54 am

Yes :twisted:
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Fri Aug 26, 2011 5:39 am

Nice New Chapter.

Love how so many monsters appear out of nowhere.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby MothraRocks » Fri Aug 26, 2011 4:12 pm

Nice chapter, looking forward to the next one, nice touch with all the monsters :)
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