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Postby King Caesar » Thu May 26, 2011 12:34 pm

A lightbulb went off in my head, and I think I found a way to make this work...enjoy! :twisted:
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby MothraRocks » Thu May 26, 2011 12:44 pm

I read the first chapter. I loved it! Good description, sentence structure and the end was full of suspense!!! :mrgreen:
Good job man!
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Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Thu May 26, 2011 1:15 pm

Fantastic writing as usual, dude! Good luck with it!
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby gpulse90 » Sat May 28, 2011 10:00 am

Nice chapter.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Sat May 28, 2011 10:44 am

Thanks everyone. The second part is just about finished. Just like with Mechabara, this is gonna be at least 45 posts...assuming I write this whole thing out of course :)
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Wed Jun 01, 2011 7:10 am

Well, change of plans. I found how I'm going to construct the story now, so you can expect more parts more frequently. ;) Stay juicy, my friends.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby Saw-U-In-1/2 » Wed Jun 01, 2011 7:31 am

Cool new chapter. Very good at building suspense.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby MothraRocks » Wed Jun 01, 2011 9:42 am

As usual, your writing amazing! Great descriptions, and suspense built. Looking forward to the next chapter. Btw way, cool idea with the zombie Ebirah idea :mrgreen:
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Wed Jun 01, 2011 10:31 am

^ It's part of King Caesar's resurrection...there might be another zombie, but I'll let you wait and see ;)
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby gpulse90 » Wed Jun 01, 2011 11:22 am

George A. Romero?
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby John31nick » Fri Jun 03, 2011 2:16 am

This is interesting, something different than other common worrier stories. The concept is appreciable.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Sat Jun 04, 2011 7:12 pm

A short but sweet section added onto chapter one as the plot thickens. What is going to happen; who is the next monster; why is the eclipse significant? All this and more to be soon revealed!!
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby EX Orochi » Sat Jun 04, 2011 7:17 pm

Awesome new section.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby MothraRocks » Sat Jun 04, 2011 7:23 pm

Pretty good! You're doing a very good lead up to the story and action scenes.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:10 pm

The epic conclusion of chapter 1 is up. It may be a bit dark, but that's just how it is! ;)
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby MothraRocks » Fri Jun 10, 2011 12:42 pm

I liked it! That was a good cliff hanger and everything :mrgreen:
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby Mogu » Sat Jun 11, 2011 5:23 am

Are you taking any more monsters?If you are then can you add Shadow the Shadow Wraith(Left)?
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Sat Jun 11, 2011 6:06 am

*facepalm* Mogu, this is an actual story with the Toho monsters, not fan-made. :roll:
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby MothraRocks » Sat Jun 11, 2011 6:14 am

Oh, so that's what he was talking about...
Just out of curiosity, did u read the story Mogu ? :P
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby GodzillavsZilla » Sat Jun 11, 2011 6:15 am

Mogu I don't think you've read the story
Shadow wrote:Wait, it's coming back to me... I was a pony... oh god... Kiryu2012 is right beside me... no my clothes, stop taking them off- *Takes shotgun and commits suicide*
And now here I am.
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