The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

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Postby kikomia » Wed Aug 24, 2011 5:01 pm

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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Thu Aug 25, 2011 2:47 am

Fixed it. Happy?! -_- lol
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Thu Aug 25, 2011 5:54 am

Yes :twisted:
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Fri Aug 26, 2011 5:39 am

Nice New Chapter.

Love how so many monsters appear out of nowhere.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby MothraRocks » Fri Aug 26, 2011 4:12 pm

Nice chapter, looking forward to the next one, nice touch with all the monsters :)
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:48 pm

Here we go...Gabara is back and pissed off like never before. :) Enjoy
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Wed Sep 14, 2011 7:43 am

Hate to double post, but no one said anything about last chapter, soooo I'm forced to. -_- Enjoy.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Wed Sep 14, 2011 8:19 am

I liked it. And the one before it. Plus you spelled thiswayandthat <-------- like this
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Wed Sep 14, 2011 8:26 am

Intentional mistake. It's a technique used by older writers used to utilize to emphasized the emotion/action of the person/thing doing it.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Wed Sep 14, 2011 8:30 am

King Caesar wrote:Intentional mistake. It's a technique used by older writers used to utilize to emphasized the emotion/action of the person/thing doing it.


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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby MothraRocks » Wed Sep 14, 2011 4:15 pm

kikomia wrote:
King Caesar wrote:Intentional mistake. It's a technique used by older writers used to utilize to emphasized the emotion/action of the person/thing doing it.


;)


Aw, Kiko is confused! Small words Caesar, small words...


Lol, liked the chapters, I cant wait to see more of Gabby :)
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Fri Sep 16, 2011 1:34 pm

Not a monster chapter, but definitely one worth reading. :) And, hey, this might just turn into a soap opera if I want it to.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Tue Sep 20, 2011 1:01 pm

You you used King Racer eh? I liked it.
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Tue Sep 20, 2011 1:14 pm

Please don't tell me "Racer" means something bad in your language. :shock:
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby MothraRocks » Tue Sep 20, 2011 2:34 pm

Ignore it and it goes away lol. Liked the chapter, added mystery, and nice touch with the Okinawan legends, I knew I recognized that name somewhere!
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby King Caesar » Tue Sep 20, 2011 2:44 pm

MothraRocks wrote:Ignore it and it goes away lol. Liked the chapter, added mystery, and nice touch with the Okinawan legends, I knew I recognized that name somewhere!

Which one? (There's a lot of names mentioned in this section) :P
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Re: The Rise of Caesar: Discussion, Suggestion Thread

Postby kikomia » Wed Sep 21, 2011 3:54 am

King Caesar wrote:Please don't tell me "Racer" means something bad in your language. :shock:


No but Race means Hands so its all good.
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