Godzilla: The Monarch Files [DISCUSSION THREAD]

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Godzilla: The Monarch Files [DISCUSSION THREAD]

Postby ScriptMaker12 » Wed Feb 27, 2019 4:56 pm

A discussion thread for my Godzilla fic. Feel free to talk about or critique as you please.

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Re: Godzilla: The Monarch Files [DISCUSSION THREAD]

Postby Gojira21 » Fri Jun 28, 2019 8:18 pm

Im surprised no one else has commented on this! I actually really enjoyed what you have posted. I love the blending of the different stories and universe and how you tried to give them a realistic connection. Honestly, don't really have anything to critique as I think its done pretty well. Guess only grip I would have is its kind of hard to keep up with the order, it feels as if it bounces around a lot but I guess thats kind of the point lol

Anyways, hope you eventually continue this! I'd love to see where this might go next

P.s Damnit, why does Gordon got to die :lol:
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