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Godzilla:Awoken Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Mon Sep 03, 2018 1:19 pm

Hello All! Here is the discussion page for my newest Godzilla story! (And im sure won't be my last :lol: ). Now this one will combine elements from all of my previous stories, and it will be a lot more somber than what usually see.

Now not going to give away to many details, but this story will get into some serious stuff! Soooo you just have to wait and find out 8-)

Plus, the title for the story may change. Im not a fan of the current title, so if anyone has any title suggestions feel free to let me know :lol:

Anyways, you know the drill. Enjoy!

EDIT: Also forgot to mention that I plan on making this story long! So it will broken down into 3 parts. The first one named The Awakening. Think of the way Stephen King and Dean Koontz set up their stories
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Re: Godzilla:Awoken Discussion

Postby GodzillavsJason » Mon Sep 03, 2018 1:49 pm

Glad to see you back, old friend. :D

Anyway, I'm really enjoying the story so far, and the eerie, dark atmosphere is always great to see in your stories. Loved the mystery and the way you're setting up the characters. They feel human, but yet all are haunted by something in some sort of way. If that makes sense. I'm also really liking how slow you're taking this and not having Gawdzira come out and destroy stuff instantly. Taking your time is always a good thing.

However, I will say I did notice some minor spelling errors, but it was the only the problem in the story so far.

Beyond that, the story is really good and I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Re: Godzilla:Awoken Discussion

Postby Gojira21 » Mon Sep 03, 2018 1:52 pm

Thank you! Good to be back and get at it 8-)

And that is the plan! For the first couple of chapters I want Godzilla to have a presence, story wise, but not actually by physically there just yet

But when he does finally appear it will be glorious lol

Glad you enjoy! And I’ll look over it again for those mistakes, although I think I know where they are
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Re: Godzilla:Awoken

Postby monintoho » Tue Jan 22, 2019 9:47 am

interesting story

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Re: Godzilla:Awoken Discussion

Postby SuperPawnageGigan » Fri Jan 25, 2019 11:05 am

Sounds Awesome.
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