Peterson Report: July 1948 Discussion/Feedback
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Peterson Report: July 1948 Discussion/Feedback
So I decided to post a little sci-fi short story that is vaguely connected to Drog War, it's...a bit of a pyschological horror story. Gimme some feedback!
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-fatass bodies
-big thighs
-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
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Re: Peterson Report: July 1948 Discussion/Feedback
It's certainly a good read. Not too terribly long, which works in the favor of the Void. It was nice to see how the mind of Agent Peterson slowly fell apart from such an event, and it makes you wonder if it even happened at all. Well done GTK.
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Re: Peterson Report: July 1948 Discussion/Feedback
Cosmic Horror done right. No answers at the end, a dire mood for the protagonist's fate, and an impending sense of doom. Ya did good mate.
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