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DTaHHverse one-shots discussion thread.

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Surprise! Bet you guys didn't see this coming.

So, yeah, exactly what it says on the tin. The DTaHH!verse now has a one-shots thread. These one-shots can range from things that the main story hasn't exactly touched on, to events that pre-date the events of DTaHH!

I'll get around to posting the rules for the one-shots later.


... I am terrible at starting threads. 8P
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And now the secret's out about the Undisclosed One-Shot. After my computer went batshit, I had to commit a lot of this one-shot to memory. Thankfully NSZ also had the bits that I sent him before that happened so I didn't waste time hammering this out.

This was especially fun to write, and I hope ya'll enjoy it.
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This was really, really nice!

Even though I'm not a football guy, I thought this was a really nice way to make our characters feel more comfortable with each other (Not that way!) and get more of their personalities down. Plus, the two pairings were really cute and it was nice to see Sal defend Kara from those two..... oh. One asshole and his imaginary friend. :P

All in all this was really well done and a great first installment for the one-shot series of Hellview high.
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Thanks dude! After that setback with the laptop, I was so happy to finish this. The names for those two changed a lot (especially Hobbes) in the time I was writing it until I settled on Calvin and Hobbes. Originally Hobbes was gonna be a reference to another asshole in MtG lore, but I thought something much more recognizable would be best.

Speaking of references, I bet you missed the kaiju references in two of the play calls :P

And I forgot to put this in the first post, but huge thanks to NSZ for looking it over before posting!
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New one shot posted. Enjoy, everyone!
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As someone unfamilar with the main story, I really enjoyed this! Sure, I'd probably enjoy it more with proper context but on its own it's fun!
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-fatass bodies
-big thighs
-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!
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Glad you enjoyed it, GTK!
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Godzilla The King wrote:As someone unfamilar with the main story, I really enjoyed this! Sure, I'd probably enjoy it more with proper context but on its own it's fun!
Damn your backlog! :lol:

Anyway, great work once again, Sal!

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NSZ wrote:
Godzilla The King wrote:As someone unfamilar with the main story, I really enjoyed this! Sure, I'd probably enjoy it more with proper context but on its own it's fun!
Damn your backlog! :lol:

Anyway, great work once again, Sal!

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It wouldn't be suffering if he would just DOOOODGE! :lol:

Thanks dude, glad you enjoyed it. Also, thanks for checking it over while I was in hell at work.
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NSZ wrote:
Damn your backlog! :lol:
I'LL GET ONTO IT! I'LL GET ONTO IT!
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gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
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-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
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Godzilla The King wrote:
NSZ wrote:
Damn your backlog! :lol:
I'LL GET ONTO IT! I'LL GET ONTO IT!
Binge read! Binge read like you've never binge read before!
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Very nicely done Sal. Like your first one-shot, this was really done damn well.

Loved the fights at the end along with the humor and all the Easter eggs.

Amazing job as usual.

Now when I have the time, I need to work on my oneshot for this verse.
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New one-shot is up, and probably one of the most brutally personal storylines I've ever written. MAJOR credit to NSZ for writing the lore behind Samantha and company's family, because good odds are I'd have fucked up at some point or too, as well as reading it over before posting this.

*CAUTION* Domestic situation involved!
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SpanishBulldog63 wrote:MAJOR credit to NSZ for writing the lore behind Samantha and company's family, because good odds are I'd have fucked up at some point or too, as well as reading it over before posting this.
As always, it was my pleasure, Sal!
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“I’ll probably be back later. Keep a beer cold for me?”.
I hope Wade does get to crack open a cold with the boys.

Also, dem RvB and RWBY references.

All in all, I really liked the backstory and additional character development to Wade, as it made him into an even more entertaining and interesting character to read about.

Amazing work as usual, Sal.
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Thanks ya meme-loving fuck!

I enjoyed writing this, not just for Wade's character, but for Samantha and James (one of most evil things I've ever written) as well and how all three are tied together.

And you know I can't pass up making those references! (#AaronIsWashConfirmed)
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