Goodbye to the King Disscussion

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Goodbye to the King Disscussion

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I figured in honor of today, I would post a oneshot about Godzilla but, to make things interesting I decided to take it from the perspective of an aging Serizawa, looking back on his life.

Feel free to discuss it!
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Re: Goodbye to the King Disscussion

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The timing of this one-shot is impeccable!

It's a really nice one shot of Serizawa thinking about his whole life long event going after Gojira and how he will change and yet the King of the Monsters doesn't.

If I had to give a criticism is the spacing issues so you might want to go back and edit so it doesn't feel a bit crowded.

Other than that: fantastic!
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