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"What if one of us went bad? What if they took over the world, what would we do? Would we listen to them, following their every order, or would we fight? Well, that's about to be answered soon..."

The Emissaries failed, everything they fought for was all for nothing. Turning cynical, they became the very thing they thought against, possibly even worse. Under new leadership, most of the Emissaries now control the world under the pretenses of "defending it." Both hero and villain bow to their will, unable to resist their power. But there is a resistance movement, led by a former ally of theirs, gaining its own power. Mostly comprised of villains, they'll fight to the death to restore the world to the way it was. Now, a war is starting.

That's right, an Emissaries AU based based off Injustice: Gods Among Us, mostly the comic in this case but the game will be touched on. I've decided where most of the cast will land and have been working on this with Alex for a while on this. One thing I am encouraging is y'all designing your alternate universe counterparts!

Currently, I'm shooting for the first chapter to be out in a month or two. Hope you'll enjoy it when it comes out!
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I really can't wait to read this when this comes out!
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Heheheh. This'll be fuuuuun!
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Looks cool! Can't wait to see it.

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Posted the first chapter!
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gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
-fatass bodies
-big thighs
-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!
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That was eggcellent man! I really loved all the character interactions, particularly the A Whip of Pink moments which were my favorite moments of the chapter. And I just loved the atmosphere of it all and the tone that it is setting up.

Outstanding job GTK.
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I can see that a lot of care went into making this as good as possible. The moments between Tyler and Morgana were pretty cute, and the Grit vs Tyler/Morgana/Ryan fight was pretty cool.
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Thank you all for your kind words, I worked hard on this and had some help from Banner and Alex on this.

Chapter 2 should be out next month.
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gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
-fatass bodies
-big thighs
-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!
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Not often we see a story in a 1st person POV. That was extremely well done, GTK. Between the Whip of Pink moments, other character interactions, the fight with The Grit, and TFS references, idk what I enjoyed more!
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Figured I'd go first person since it's a very personal story. Actually, now that I think about it, all my major stories besides Writers and Batman are in first person. I just think it helps get into character's heads more.
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gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
-fatass bodies
-big thighs
-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!
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Wow! this was great! Not gonna lie, but the emotional parts made me feel well...emotional. I said it before, and I'll say it again, good on ya GTK!
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GodzillaFreak99 wrote:Wow! this was great! Not gonna lie, but the emotional parts made me feel well...emotional. I said it before, and I'll say it again, good on ya GTK!
Ah, thanks, man! I tried.

Anyone worried about them not getting a lot of screentime, don't worry Chapter 2 will have a lot more screentime for everyone. The first chapter was merely meant to get the tone right and set things up.
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gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
-fatass bodies
-big thighs
-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
-messed up timeline
MAKES ME HORNY
UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!
CaptainStarbird wrote: "Look under your chair for a gift, it's a bitchslap!"

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