Batman: First Crusade Announcement and Discussion Thread

[Godzilla The King]

Thanks guys.

[DinoMaster]

Well done GTK. An excellent chapter, and I enjoyed the story greatly. It's rarely that we get to see this slot in time where he trained, and the conflict between Talia and Bruce is quite interesting to see. I look forward to seeing more, and how things develop further on.

[Godzilla The King]

Just because I want to confirm I am still writing this, here's a little preview for y'all.

"...On his face was a brief flash of amusement at the...misconceptions these poor fools had about the nature of him. The Bat had been in Gotham for three weeks now and no one truly believed he existed but the criminals. Men that work in the shadows seem to be afraid of their own shadows. Or, and this thought passing the Bat’s mind is a favorite of his, many of these street punks never finished school. Either way, the criminal element in Gotham can be seen as stupid, they never had to work their way to anything and it was dreadfully obvious here. So, the shadow of the Bat shifted coming into the view…"

[Godzilla The King]

And that's chapter 2

[DinoMaster]

Well done! It's good to see the Bat in action, and I loved the Gordon and Alfred parts. I also enjoyed the new villain introduction at the end, which I look forward to seeing go in action.

[GodzillavsJason]

Excellent work GTK!

Really loving the dialogue and the action sequences particularly this whole part here.

“Please don’t kill me!” The crook shouted with a shaky voice.

“I’m not here to kill you, I’m here to talk.” The Bat growled. “Tell your friends, hell, tell the cops who did this to you.”

“What the hell are you?!” The thug shouted again in fear.

“Your worst nightmare.”

Keep up the amazing work.

[Godzilla The King]

Writing for Alfred was my favorite bit of this chapter.