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Re: The Emissaries: Season 1 Discussion Board

Postby NSZ » Mon Aug 15, 2016 11:28 am

Reporting to you live from monitorless hell, it's NSZ!

Chapter was pretty good, Al (though I could never hate Ruby, that's just crazy).

Hopefully I'll have a new computer monitor in time for Alley's proper introduction.
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Postby pta917 » Mon Aug 15, 2016 12:31 pm

That was a pretty fun read, it's always fun to see old villains return.
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Mon Aug 15, 2016 1:35 pm

NSZ wrote:Reporting to you live from monitorless hell, it's NSZ!

Chapter was pretty good, Al (though I could never hate Ruby, that's just crazy).

Hopefully I'll have a new computer monitor in time for Alley's proper introduction.


You hate Ruby, but like Fade said "You're just going to head back to your room and look at pictures of her". :P

Thanks man, glad you enjoyed the episode and there will be plenty of more of exciting adventures. And I do hope you'll have a new monitor soon.

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Thanks man, glad you enjoyed the episode and we all knew who won.

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Postby Godzilla The King » Mon Aug 15, 2016 2:09 pm

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Postby GodzillaFreak99 » Tue Aug 16, 2016 12:26 am

*walks in**sees that everyone is staring at me* What? ....I told you guys those damn sirens were giving me a skreeonking migraine! Can't we all just forgive and forget?

chapter was awesome btw. one question though. When Ernest and Hayes were blocked off from one another in the hall way, why didn't Hayse just phase through the door?
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Tue Aug 16, 2016 9:49 pm

GodzillaFreak99 wrote:*walks in**sees that everyone is staring at me* What? ....I told you guys those damn sirens were giving me a skreeonking migraine! Can't we all just forgive and forget?

chapter was awesome btw. one question though. When Ernest and Hayes were blocked off from one another in the hall way, why didn't Hayse just phase through the door?


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Well if you want the out of universe explanation: I forgot, but the in universe explanation which I'll attempt to retcon is can be one of two reasons. One; Hayes was just getting annoyed by Ernest and didn't even bother going through the door, hoping Ernest would forget about his power which he did (No, thanks to me :P ). Two; Tenebra could have had some light influence on him and could have made him not want to go through.
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Postby NSZ » Tue Aug 16, 2016 11:01 pm

Let's be real here, I think we'd all do what Hayes did and take the long way around, no mindfuckery needed. :P
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Nov 27, 2016 1:09 am

New episode is up, but shorter than the usual, but I think you're all going to like this one quite a bit.
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Postby Giratina93 » Sun Nov 27, 2016 1:38 am

Fun chapter to read. Never piss off Alley. RYAN, YOU skreeonked UP, AND NOW EVERYONE IS GOING TO DIE.

in all seriousness, I need to bring up a major gripe I have with your style, Alex. First off, the tenses are all over the place, and it drives me mad as an English major. It's predominantly Present (which is a rarity in novels and stories) with some past thrown in, sometimes in the same sentence. Please keep to one form of tense in your work, unless it's specifically dialogue which warrants different tenses when appropriate. Otherwise, it can get not only confusing to tell when certain events happen related to others, but it's just a mess to look at.
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Postby NSZ » Sun Nov 27, 2016 1:45 am

My thoughts while in the middle of reading: This is pretty dang tense; I should be alright as long as I don't do anything to piss her of-

[Alley gets a bottle thrown at her face]

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Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Nov 27, 2016 10:05 am

Thanks NSZ and Gira, glad you liked the episode and bottle throwing sure is fun. Things will get even more tense with Episode 14, but I personally liked writing this episode as it was different than the usual.

Also, Gira I'll keep that in mind, but I may keep doing because I now know what makes your skin crawl. :P
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Postby GodzillaFreak99 » Fri Dec 23, 2016 4:49 pm

GodzillavsJason wrote:New episode is up, but shorter than the usual, but I think you're all going to like this one quite a bit.


Poor Ryan. He hath not but a measly raft to sail through his sea of suffering. :cry:
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Jan 21, 2017 1:07 pm

New episode is up and I hope you all like it!
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Postby M.U.T.O. » Sat Jan 21, 2017 1:25 pm

IT'S poop! :P

Naw, it's p good. Needs a lil' bit of formatting-centric proofreading, but it's pretty damn good!
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Postby GodzillaFreak99 » Sat Jan 21, 2017 8:53 pm

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH HOLY MOTHER OF WHATEVER BROUGHT US INTO EXISTENCE! An eggcellent job my friend! :mrgreen: This was well worth the wait! Although, I wasn't expecting it to happen this soon, but I digress (and yeah, what M.U.T.O said)

I do have a couple of questions though,

1. Now that all is well and good with Matt and Olivia, what's next for the two of them?

2. Da faq happened with Ryan near the end there?!

3. Will Ryan ever return?
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Mon Jan 23, 2017 10:06 pm

Thank you guys, I'm really glad you loved the episode, and to answer your questions, GodzillaFreak.

1. They'll most likely continue to spar and meet up to patch things up, we'll just have to see.

2. Foreshadowing.

3. Soon.
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Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat May 05, 2018 11:44 pm

After over a year, a new episode has been posted.
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Postby GodzillaFreak99 » Sun May 06, 2018 6:03 am

GodzillavsJason wrote:After over a year, a new episode has been posted.

*opens soda**sip* Ah, after so long, it feels great to be back! *sip*

...Remind me never to get on Elena's bad side. :mrgreen:
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Re: The Emissaries: Season 1 Discussion Board

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun May 06, 2018 9:07 am

GodzillaFreak99 wrote:
GodzillavsJason wrote:After over a year, a new episode has been posted.

*opens soda**sip* Ah, after so long, it feels great to be back! *sip*

...Remind me never to get on Elena's bad side. :mrgreen:


You said it! It's great to be back. :)
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