It came from Egypt Discussion Thread

pta917 · Post by **pta917** » Fri Aug 21, 2015 6:13 am

After their encounter with the Daleks in New York, the Doctor and Martha try to get some rest, just to be visited by a strange and disturbing being, in need of their services.

A sequel to Black Water, where the Doctors actions come back to haunt him.

Post by **GodzillavsJason** » Fri Aug 21, 2015 9:55 am

Nicely done intro man and setting it up for one fun adventure in Egypt.

Glad to you're continuing to write.

pta917 · Post by **pta917** » Wed Aug 26, 2015 12:38 pm

New chapter.
The Doctor, Martha and Jack arrive at Egypt, as they follow the digging they, witness the discovery of something beyond horror.

Post by **GodzillavsJason** » Fri Aug 28, 2015 1:41 pm

Nicely don my friend. It was cool to see the settlement and nice to see them getting down to the investigation.

Post by **Ice Man** » Sat Aug 29, 2015 9:09 pm

I must say that while I am not a Doctor Who fan this was a enjoyable read and I will be awaiting the next update.

pta917 · Post by **pta917** » Thu Sep 03, 2015 8:33 am

New chapter is up.

Post by **GodzillavsJason** » Thu Sep 03, 2015 5:22 pm

Some grammar issues, but all in all not a bad read. Things are getting interesting.

DinoMaster · Post by **DinoMaster** » Thu Sep 03, 2015 5:35 pm

I've been enjoying this one a good deal. I love me some Lovecraft, and you have a good way of making it feel like a Doctor Who episode. Besides the grammar issues, the only thing I noticed was a common use of the word Roared. Overall, good job.

pta917 · Post by **pta917** » Thu Sep 03, 2015 11:33 pm

Thank you guys for the feedback.
I'm glad that your enjoying it and I'll work on fixing those issues on the following chapter.

pta917 · Post by **pta917** » Tue Feb 16, 2016 4:17 am

Fourth chapter is posted.

pta917 · Post by **pta917** » Tue Feb 16, 2016 12:50 pm

Fifth and last chapter is posted.
I hope you all enjoyed this little story.

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