The Drog War - Official Discussion

[Godzilla The King]

It's how I as the writer imagine it.

Wonder who'd I cast as the characters...

[GodzillavsJason]

“My sister doesn’t live far from here.” He mentioned before turning to Kingston. “Don’t get ideas, Kingston.”

Oh my!

Anyway, I'm loving this so far. I'm really getting some noire vibes along with a lot of mystery and suspense. Something in which I greatly approve. Keep up the amazing work.

[Godzilla The King]

Oh certainly, I'll admit this chapter was the hardest to work on despite not taking the longest. It was hard for me to characterize Hunter without making him unlikeable. I wanted to make him ruthless but understandably so.

[Godzilla The King]

This is just a question that popped into my mind, but who is your favorite of the protagonists of Drog War?

[Godzilla The King]

It's seriously coming back this time, the schedule slip won't be as bad.

[Godzilla The King]

Will be finished today or tomorrow, debating on whether we should post it when finished or wait on it.

[Godzilla The King]

This is not dead, I swear. Life has just been being a bitch to us.

[Godzilla The King]

What's this, a new chapter?! Credit goes to DM for the ending bit!

[GodzillavsJason]

A new chapterino? Woah! This is a nice surprise!

Anyway this was a nicely done chapter with a lot of fun and suspenseful moments of our characters talking. I can't wait for the next chapter man and keep up the great work.

[NSZ]

Yay, this ain't dead!

Worth the wait, IMO.

[Godzilla The King]

Glad to see positive reactions, any favorite scenes, bits, or line of dialogue?

[DinoMaster]

Excellent chapter! It's really good to go and see the people conflicting with each other along with a Drog appearance. Good work overall!

Flint was my favorite, but bias.

[EdGojira]

I read it and enjoyed it. I think that some of the romance here was awkward, but that may just be my awkwardness in situations like that.

I am pretty terrible at providing feedback.

Am looking forward to these guys in One Last Question.

[Godzilla The King]

I read it and enjoyed it. I think that some of the romance here was awkward, but that may just be my awkwardness in situations like that.

I am pretty terrible at providing feedback.

Am looking forward to these guys in One Last Question.

On the Romance thing, anyone else got any comments? I'm not the greatest but I hope I'm not doing George Lucas level shit. (Not saying you said that, Ed, just worried.)

[EdGojira]

I read it and enjoyed it. I think that some of the romance here was awkward, but that may just be my awkwardness in situations like that.

I am pretty terrible at providing feedback.

Am looking forward to these guys in One Last Question.

On the Romance thing, anyone else got any comments? I'm not the greatest but I hope I'm not doing George Lucas level shit. (Not saying you said that, Ed, just worried.)

I wouldn't call it George Lucas level by any means.

[Godzilla The King]

Still asking for reassurance and so I can get better at it. I want there to be chemistry between the two.

[Godzilla The King]

Would any of you be interested in us going into more detail about what kind of place Raven's Thread is? I mean we know how it is in the present but 60's Raven's Thread? I feel as though we've been skimping out on explaining it.

[Godzilla The King]

Despite the long breaks, I'll have you know me and MUTO have no plans of dropping this.