The Drog War - Official Discussion
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It's how I as the writer imagine it.
Wonder who'd I cast as the characters...
Wonder who'd I cast as the characters...
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Oh my!“My sister doesn’t live far from here.” He mentioned before turning to Kingston. “Don’t get ideas, Kingston.”
Anyway, I'm loving this so far. I'm really getting some noire vibes along with a lot of mystery and suspense. Something in which I greatly approve. Keep up the amazing work.
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Oh certainly, I'll admit this chapter was the hardest to work on despite not taking the longest. It was hard for me to characterize Hunter without making him unlikeable. I wanted to make him ruthless but understandably so.
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This is just a question that popped into my mind, but who is your favorite of the protagonists of Drog War?
CaptainStarbird wrote:UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
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It's seriously coming back this time, the schedule slip won't be as bad.
CaptainStarbird wrote:UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
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Will be finished today or tomorrow, debating on whether we should post it when finished or wait on it.
CaptainStarbird wrote:UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
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This is not dead, I swear. Life has just been being a bitch to us.
CaptainStarbird wrote:UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
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What's this, a new chapter?! Credit goes to DM for the ending bit!
CaptainStarbird wrote:UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
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A new chapterino? Woah! This is a nice surprise!
Anyway this was a nicely done chapter with a lot of fun and suspenseful moments of our characters talking. I can't wait for the next chapter man and keep up the great work.
Anyway this was a nicely done chapter with a lot of fun and suspenseful moments of our characters talking. I can't wait for the next chapter man and keep up the great work.
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Yay, this ain't dead!
Worth the wait, IMO.
Worth the wait, IMO.
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Glad to see positive reactions, any favorite scenes, bits, or line of dialogue?
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Excellent chapter! It's really good to go and see the people conflicting with each other along with a Drog appearance. Good work overall!
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I read it and enjoyed it. I think that some of the romance here was awkward, but that may just be my awkwardness in situations like that.
I am pretty terrible at providing feedback.
Am looking forward to these guys in One Last Question.
I am pretty terrible at providing feedback.
Am looking forward to these guys in One Last Question.
How long has it been? I honestly forgot.
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On the Romance thing, anyone else got any comments? I'm not the greatest but I hope I'm not doing George Lucas level shit. (Not saying you said that, Ed, just worried.)EdGojira wrote:I read it and enjoyed it. I think that some of the romance here was awkward, but that may just be my awkwardness in situations like that.
I am pretty terrible at providing feedback.
Am looking forward to these guys in One Last Question.
CaptainStarbird wrote:UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
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-some undersized arms
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I wouldn't call it George Lucas level by any means.Godzilla The King wrote:On the Romance thing, anyone else got any comments? I'm not the greatest but I hope I'm not doing George Lucas level shit. (Not saying you said that, Ed, just worried.)EdGojira wrote:I read it and enjoyed it. I think that some of the romance here was awkward, but that may just be my awkwardness in situations like that.
I am pretty terrible at providing feedback.
Am looking forward to these guys in One Last Question.
How long has it been? I honestly forgot.
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Still asking for reassurance and so I can get better at it. I want there to be chemistry between the two.
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Would any of you be interested in us going into more detail about what kind of place Raven's Thread is? I mean we know how it is in the present but 60's Raven's Thread? I feel as though we've been skimping out on explaining it.
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Despite the long breaks, I'll have you know me and MUTO have no plans of dropping this.
CaptainStarbird wrote:UNLIKE THOSE ANOREXIC SHOWA MODELS!gigan72 wrote:MMMMM, HEISEI
-fatass bodies
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-some undersized arms
-beam spam
-a mans ass
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MAKES ME HORNY
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