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“BRING IT OOOON!”
Calm down there, Joe Swanson.

... minus points for them not facing rat-based Grimm though. Tsk tsk.
Oh, is a pack of Chupacabra-based Grimm not good enough? ;)
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Aww yiss initiation time. Dis gon b gud.

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Inferno Rodan wrote:Aww yiss initiation time. Dis gon b gud.

ohai Stella
Thought you'd like her appearance ;) If any of the OC older students were to come give helpful words to Orion on his situation, it'd be her.
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At this point, his name is the least of his worries. And speaking of worries, nothing screams "RUN" like a giant Tyrant. That's right folks, another new chapter because I'm you're awesome. :P

Enjoy!
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Yay for destruction of school property!

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Words cannot describe how much I was hoping the Odontotyrannos-inspired Grimm you hinted at a while ago would make its appearance during Initiation. :huge:
"But, uh, you hadn't told us to listen to you yet. So I didn't."

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SpanishBulldog63 wrote:At this point, his name is the least of his worries. And speaking of worries, nothing screams "RUN" like a giant Tyrant. That's right folks, another new chapter because I'm you're GodzillavsJason is awesome. :P

Enjoy!
Ah! You're too kind. 8-)

Anyway, that chapter was sick! Loved the fight sequences and how Marian had that confident warrior mentality. Now this Tyrant foe will make for a good suspenseful next chapter.
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NSZ wrote:Words cannot describe how much I was hoping the Odontotyrannos-inspired Grimm you hinted at a while ago would make its appearance during Initiation. :huge:
Dude, you have no idea much fun it's going to be writing the next chapter! So far, the hardest thing is finding a song that'll fit for the sequence.
HayesAJones wrote:Yay for destruction of school property!
Yay for destruction overall!
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It just wouldn't be a proper initiation without a giant Grimm.
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No it wouldn't, IR.

Speaking of which, the fight you guys were waiting for is finally here. It's sure to be a smash hit.

Now, ladies and gentlemen, go right into it and enjoy!
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Yep, this chapter was fantastic.

The Tyrant was everything I was hoping it'd be. :huge:
"But, uh, you hadn't told us to listen to you yet. So I didn't."

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Glad the Tyrant lived up to expectations, NSZ. I've had that fight scene envisioned for months now, and it was fun to write.
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That was guddumm amazing! Very great job making sure our four main characters get a crack at the big monster. This was everything I was expecting it to be.
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Glad you enjoyed it! And hey, that was the perfect time to quote Don Frye!

Pretty sure Hayes is still the Grif of the of the story. :P
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SpanishBulldog63 wrote:Glad you enjoyed it! And hey, that was the perfect time to quote Don Frye!

Pretty sure Hayes is still the Grif of the of the story. :P
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“I’m gonna go right into it,” Orion said
He pronounced that wrong. It's actually closer to, "I'm gonna GO RIGHT INTO IT."

Also, you can't convince me that Orion wasn't purposely being quite in the hopes to hearing the group break down over his disappearing and flood what they thought were posthumous compliments over him.

He should have expected Nemo though. Poor guy.

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HayesAJones wrote:Also, you can't convince me that Orion wasn't purposely being quite in the hopes to hearing the group break down over his disappearing and flood what they thought were posthumous compliments over him.
I would say "You try and tackle a 60-ft tyrannosaur-Grimm off a cliff and burst out of its back, after running full speed for what felt like hours after you just killed a pack of Chupa-thingys. See if you're not tired after that ;) "

But you'd rather tackle Marlon Brando, wouldn't you? :P
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You know, now that I think about it, do Grimm even actually have blood? Eh, whatever. Was awesome regardless.

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Thanks IR. IIRC, there were a few instances in the Volume 2 finale that showed some spurts of blood...not counting Coco's purse of doom.

Stella just getting all the one-ups on Jameson. "Oh, we're tied? lolnope!"
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