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Call of Zetton Discussion Thread
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Re: Call of Zetton Discussion Thread
The fight was nice and their tactics were nicely doe with King distracting Zetton in the fight.
The ending just felt a little anti-climatic to me with them being revived and just being at that. With no reaction from them or anything.
Still a good short story and I enjoyed reading it. I hope to see more from you soon.
The ending just felt a little anti-climatic to me with them being revived and just being at that. With no reaction from them or anything.
Still a good short story and I enjoyed reading it. I hope to see more from you soon.
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Re: Call of Zetton Discussion Thread
Thank you for the feedback.GodzillavsJason wrote: I hope to see more from you soon.
And do you think I am a machine? I takes time to think stories up.
Davros wrote:This is my ultimate victory, Doctor! The destruction of REALITY ITSELF!