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SpanishBulldog63 wrote:All Kubo did was make a light joke about getting back on topic. You didn't need to be snappy about it. Next time I see you do something like that to another member, it's a warning.

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Yes, let's get back on topic here and talk about how great this story is.
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Thanks everyone, glad you all are enjoying it so far! Update for you all. The 2nd chapter taking little longer that I would have liked mainly because there are a lot being done in this chapter and I'm constantly going back and fourth with changing parts.
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UPDATE: Chapter is finally up, and we are introduced to two characters. One is a character I created, and the other one is SpanishBulldog's very own Armando Estrada. Wonder if anyone will catch the significance of my character that I created...hmmm.

But anyway, you know the deal. Read, comment, review, blah blah blah lol
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Good chapter with us learning about our characters so far. Keep it up. :)
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Da Nada, me amigo 8-) lol
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Well done! So, I assume you're introducing people one-by-one. Right? SB63 should be very happy.
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For the most part yes, but some chapters will have multiple introductions. I actually believe your Character is up next if I remember correctly.
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*smiles*
Oh, you...
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Exellent backstories, G21. Keep it up! :) (sorta jealous of Leary's residence)
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@ MUTO, haha, I'll do him justice

@ SpanishBulldog63, glad you loved it! I actually have some big ideas for your character

@Kubo, I am too actually, and glad you are also enjoying them!

Still guessing no-one has grasped the significance of Leary eh?
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Gojira21 wrote:Still guessing no-one has grasped the significance of Leary eh?
Related to Timothy Leary, the LSD fella?

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Yeah, I bet that's what it is.

You tryin' to coax me into doing acid, G21? Huh?
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Kubo wrote:
Gojira21 wrote:Still guessing no-one has grasped the significance of Leary eh?
Related to Timothy Leary, the LSD fella?

http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-4Ae3u6rP6o4/T ... o1_400.jpg

Yeah, I bet that's what it is.

You tryin' to coax me into doing acid, G21? Huh?
Yes, Yes I am Kubo!

But, that is not the significance of John Leary lol...think back to the prologue.
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Relax, me amigo! He will show up eventually! I'm taking my time with this story
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Looking forward to this. Not gonna rush you, though, as we all have lives to live.
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Chapter 3 is up! Or well done part of it is...the rest will be up in due time.

Enjoy 8-)
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Nicely done with you describing a scientist character. Very well done my friend.
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Thank you my good friend. Should be done with intros here shortly and then on into some interesting territory
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Good heavens, I nearly forgot I was part of this!
Love the portrayal of Nicolaus! He's an amazing character as you write him!
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Thank you, thank you! and well dont forget about this! I do appologize for how slow this is taking, that wasnt my intentions.

However, I have big ideas for your character as well. So stay tunned!
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Will do.
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