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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby Kubo » Wed Dec 10, 2014 8:49 pm

2004Zilla wrote:
Kubo wrote:That second trailer, GoJi... I'm not sure what the point was or what was even happening...

Seconded. Who's Lucario? Who's Xeno? Who's Hagar? What's anything?

What is life even?
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby GodzillavsJason » Wed Dec 10, 2014 8:50 pm

Kubo wrote:
2004Zilla wrote:
Kubo wrote:That second trailer, GoJi... I'm not sure what the point was or what was even happening...

Seconded. Who's Lucario? Who's Xeno? Who's Hagar? What's anything?

What is life even?


Shrek is life. :P
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby GoJiSbAcK » Wed Dec 10, 2014 11:23 pm

2004Zilla wrote:
Kubo wrote:That second trailer, GoJi... I'm not sure what the point was or what was even happening...

Seconded. Who's Lucario? Who's Xeno? Who's Hagar? What's anything?


H.A Hagar-New enemy

Lucario-Leader of the gang

Xeno-Bad-guy-at-first-but-now-on-the-good-side

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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby Birdman » Thu Dec 11, 2014 10:49 am

After months of inactivity and brooding, I've finally decided to try and get back into writing. But rather then update one of my old fanfics, I thought I'd start something fresh.

And so ladies and jellymen, I give you the teaser for Mechagodzilla Generations.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby 2004Zilla » Thu Dec 11, 2014 10:50 am

@GOJIISBACK

You need to work on the dialogue. That felt extremely cheesy.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby SenseiTeriyakiV » Thu Dec 11, 2014 10:52 am

@Birdman

That was very nice. I quite liked the suspenseful dialogue, addition to Serizawa's initial speech, ETC. Only thing that could be worked on is the scenes encased in Asterisks(*), maybe something like
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby Kubo » Thu Dec 11, 2014 11:50 am

So you're working in three narratives at once, or what? Sorta unsure based on the teaser.
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Re: Beginning Writers Teaser Comments Thread

Postby Kubo » Fri Dec 12, 2014 2:04 pm

Not gonna dock any points for this, GoJi, but we could see some actual content soon? There's a lot of teasers and nothing coming from it?
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby wisper15 » Sat Dec 20, 2014 8:38 pm

Kubo, that was skreeonking AWESOME!
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby Kubo » Mon Dec 22, 2014 6:09 am

Haha, thanks man. Glad you liked it. :)
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby wisper15 » Mon Dec 22, 2014 12:03 pm

Kubo wrote:Haha, thanks man. Glad you liked it. :)

I wanna see that poop, and I don't even like reading FFs. Can't wait.
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby Biogoji » Sun Dec 28, 2014 9:08 pm

Good job shippersdreamer but you have to post in the beginning writer's section.
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sun Dec 28, 2014 9:12 pm

Biogoji wrote:Good job shippersdreamer but you have to post in the beginning writer's section.


I already told him.
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby gigandude » Wed Jan 07, 2015 6:41 am

Added a teaser, kind of a rewriting of an old story I did but replacing some of the characters with new ones.
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby wisper15 » Tue Jan 13, 2015 2:57 pm

gigandude wrote:Added a teaser, kind of a rewriting of an old story I did but replacing some of the characters with new ones.

I noticed, neat poop.
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby Kubo » Tue Jan 13, 2015 5:21 pm

And I saw YOUR teaser, Wisper. Very nice. Reminds me of something Giratina would do. Does it have a title?
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby wisper15 » Tue Jan 13, 2015 5:34 pm

Kubo wrote:And I saw YOUR teaser, Wisper. Very nice. Reminds me of something Giratina would do. Does it have a title?

It has a developmental title, but I might change it eventually.
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Mar 28, 2015 9:15 pm

Trailer is up for my new story idea.

I hope you all enjoy it.
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby Lethal Weapon » Sat Mar 28, 2015 9:51 pm

Not sure I'm allowed o post in this thread because of me being a beginner but the Friday the 13h Fan boy inside of me freaked out at the end so I'm looking forward to it.
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Re: Teaser Comments.

Postby GodzillavsJason » Sat Mar 28, 2015 9:58 pm

Lethal Weapon wrote:Not sure I'm allowed o post in this thread because of me being a beginner but the Friday the 13h Fan boy inside of me freaked out at the end so I'm looking forward to it.


Even though you're a beginner, beginners are still allowed to post in discussion boards and the teaser comments on the regular section. They just can't post a story in the regular station until authorized to do so.

OT: I'm really glad you liked it so far as there's more to come with a discussion board being posted soon. :D
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