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three wrote:
M.U.T.O. wrote:Damn. This story is getting pretty freaky. I'm looking forward to more wholly, though.

the freaky part will be how in the blazes i will get Godzilla to Egypt.


can't decide if i wanna go through the atlantic or pacific ocean. X_X
I say Atlantic, through Mediterranean Coastline down to Egypt. Hell, try taking him through Syria and Israel, places where tension runs high amongst the masses (the former is way more so)!
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that was the method i had decided to use.

anyway, like i said before more Godzilla is coming. slowly, but surely in the next few chapters. first we're going back to Egypt, then a timeskip.
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three wrote:that was the method i had decided to use.

anyway, like i said before more Godzilla is coming. slowly, but surely in the next few chapters. first we're going back to Egypt, then a timeskip.
YAY! So will you take him along the Mediterranean coast, too?
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M.U.T.O. wrote:
three wrote:that was the method i had decided to use.

anyway, like i said before more Godzilla is coming. slowly, but surely in the next few chapters. first we're going back to Egypt, then a timeskip.
YAY! So will you take him along the Mediterranean coast, too?
probably. not sure if he'll hit north africa or europe but it'll have to be one of the two.


that much i'm not telling though. ;)
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chapter 4 is up. next chapter will feature Godzilla quite a bit as you will see. :D
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axnyslie wrote:I read that too quickly I though you said land MINES. Yes they are still out there so step lightly!
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I like this story so far as it gives you a brief, but haunting feel to Godzilla's rampage. I also like how we see it from the people's point of view and even makes it more suspenseful. Good job on the story so far and hope to see more.
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GodzillavsJason wrote:I like this story so far as it gives you a brief, but haunting feel to Godzilla's rampage. I also like how we see it from the people's point of view and even makes it more suspenseful. Good job on the story so far and hope to see more.
thank you. more is on the way as alluded to above. ;)
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axnyslie wrote:I read that too quickly I though you said land MINES. Yes they are still out there so step lightly!
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I love it!
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M.U.T.O. wrote:I love it!

excellent!!! :D
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axnyslie wrote:I read that too quickly I though you said land MINES. Yes they are still out there so step lightly!
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new chapter is up, detailing the "other guy's perspective" of the Russian fleet incident. David's view of what happened, and the story progresses!
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new chapter is up! a strange meeting is established as the first day in russia is recounted. we're getting closer to our conclusion with each new chapter, so stay tuned!
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another chapter! alright, the plan is coming to form. i think i'm going to change it to 3 years time from 5 for the events to have passed. next chapter should focus on the mystery woman, and then shift back to Egypt as we speed toward the conclusion.
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axnyslie wrote:I read that too quickly I though you said land MINES. Yes they are still out there so step lightly!
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new chapter up. we're going to Egypt next, and from there, we will soon reveal the mighty sun god, or simply, a god, King Ghidorah!!!
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axnyslie wrote:I read that too quickly I though you said land MINES. Yes they are still out there so step lightly!
Well, I've read through that handbook for the recently deceased. It says: 'live people ignore the strange and unusual. I, myself, am strange and unusual. ~ Lydia Deetz

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This is an impressive piece of fiction here.
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GodzillaLord wrote:This is an impressive piece of fiction here.

Someone cares?! And thank you, dude! It means a lot any time someone acknowledges my work, let alone calls it impressive. :'D
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well this is going to be finished. i've resolved myself to getting it done.
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axnyslie wrote:I read that too quickly I though you said land MINES. Yes they are still out there so step lightly!
Well, I've read through that handbook for the recently deceased. It says: 'live people ignore the strange and unusual. I, myself, am strange and unusual. ~ Lydia Deetz

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Alright awesome! Glad to see you working on this again.

Loved the Ghidorah reference at the end along with finding some ancient artifacts of some sort in pyramids.
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yep; the pyramids of Giza. apparently they're only like an hour away from Cairo in bad traffic. who knew?
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axnyslie wrote:I read that too quickly I though you said land MINES. Yes they are still out there so step lightly!
Well, I've read through that handbook for the recently deceased. It says: 'live people ignore the strange and unusual. I, myself, am strange and unusual. ~ Lydia Deetz

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