TK Man-The Series!(Discussion)

[ernesth100]

Well I don't really have anything else to write until August. But for now I've decided. Why not do a series starring TK Man(thanks UltramanGoji) as a hero fighting villains such as

-Basan(Thanks Lain)
-Izeross(Thank Beef)
-Trolls(Thanks TK forum problems)

With Friends Like
-Toki(Thanks somebody!)


Now since I'm not sure if I've ever been this excited about writing in my life! I promise the first episode out today or tomorrow if something goes wrong. Now this series isn't something I can do all on my lonesome. I need the help of the forum members to make this look good. TK Man is sport in our logo(yes, somebody so is Toki) and he has to look good in this so. If there's anything you don't agree on in the first episode let me know and I'll change it or add to it to make it a better experience for everyone!

[Gojira21]

Im not sure I fully understand this...

[ernesth100]

Im not sure I fully understand this...

Anything you need explained in specific?

[UltramanGoji]

Im not sure I fully understand this...

TK Man is a tokusatsu hero that I made as a candidate for the Forum mascot contest.

A lot of people liked him and ernesth asked if he could write a series about him, which I allowed.

[ernesth100]

^Exactly. The first episode's going well. I estimate I'll have it up sometime between 7 and 9pm.

[ernesth100]

Pilot is up!

[Gojira21]

Oh ok, didnt know was TK mascot lol interestingn

[ernesth100]

Oh ok, didnt know was TK mascot lol interestingn

Did you like the pilot? Any suggestions?

[Biogoji]

It was good I wish to see more.

[ernesth100]

It was good I wish to see more.

Oh. You'll get more so much more. I have so many planned. I have an episode prepared for tomorrow in fact.

[UltramanGoji]

I liked it, however there is one minor thing that I'd change. I'd like TK-Man's human host to be named Koji if that's alright.

That'd probably be one of his Commandments or something: "Thou shalt always have the host be named Koji"

[ernesth100]

I liked it, however there is one minor thing that I'd change. I'd like TK-Man's human host to be named Koji if that's alright.

That'd probably be one of his Commandments or something: "Thou shalt always have the host be named Koji"

Koji it will be.

[Gojira21]

I havent read the pilot yet but I will by end of the day and have a review up for ya

[ernesth100]

I havent read the pilot yet but I will by end of the day and have a review up for ya

Okay new episodes coming up soon also. Like today.

[Beef Bigshot]

First chapter....awesome! That was pretty fun to read. You may possible want to go back and shape up your writing a tad bit(maybe vary your sentence structures), but otherwise I enjoyed it alot. Cant wait to have the fight between Izeross and TK-man!

Im curious to see how violent you will make the fight. Will their be blood shed? rending of flesh? Or maybe just tossing eachother around and beam firing? who knows, cant wait to see.

Also we need more monsters for this series. Thats a problem I will try to help to fix, but cant this second.

[ernesth100]

Now you can read and see. I wanted to make it longer but I stopped the episode because I didn't have anything planned yet and I didn't wanna wing it.

[Beef Bigshot]

Now you can read and see. I wanted to make it longer but I stopped the episode because I didn't have anything planned yet and I didn't wanna wing it.

Dont worry about it. That was awesome! Your writing sporta improved alittle, which was nice. The dialogue I find interesting.

The one thing that sorta irked me was that you said that it was lucky had a strong sense of will. It was lucky? Thats it? I would have gone with more of a stuggle for him to find the will to be stronger as Izeross was crushing him. Just think, your a giant silver and blue titan fighting a giant monster, youd be a bit panicked. Koji seems REALLY calm for all of this.

What, did he smoke some weed beforehand?

But thats just me and my personal preference.

Still, i liked the new episode alot, id be willing to help give ideas for more parts

[ernesth100]

^Please do give me ideas, I could use a little help.

[UltramanGoji]

I've created a new villain for TK-Man to fight: Ramphorynch-Seijin!

http://i.imgur.com/1kpTMOO.jpg

Main Power: Ability to control and destroy beings by their dreams

Minor Powers: Lightning from mouth, can extend fingers to enormous lengths, needs to eat dreams to live

Bio: An evil magician from a far away galaxy that landed on Earth to conquer the planet by devouring the population's dreams.

[ernesth100]

I've created a new villain for TK-Man to fight: Ramphorynch-Seijin!

http://i.imgur.com/1kpTMOO.jpg

Main Power: Ability to control and destroy beings by their dreams

Minor Powers: Lightning from mouth, can extend fingers to enormous lengths, needs to eat dreams to live

Bio: An evil magician from a far away galaxy that landed on Earth to conquer the planet by devouring the population's dreams.

Great idea. I'll save that for the episode after the next.