Reionyx Brawl League Comments and Suggestion

[GodzillaLord]

Name-Drillbot

Team name- B.A.B.I.E.S (Bad Ass Bird Infestation Extermination Squad)

Description-

Physical Description-stands 18' 6, 11 Tons, wears a pair of metal gauntlets, has a short beard; he wears a green vest and basically looks like a Canadian Soldier.

Monsters:

Monsarger (Main Monster)
Dinosaur Tank
Showa Mechagodzilla

[Beef Bigshot]

Godzilla lord, you didnt put a description and used one of the big 5......fix if you want to be used.


oh and thanks BioGoji

[Demon Lord Gira]

I think it might be useful if you were to elaborate on who the Big 5 are. All I can think of, is Godzilla, Mothra, King Ghidorah, Mechagodzilla, and Anguirus, if those ARE indeed the Big 5.

Also, decent match is decent.

[Beef Bigshot]

I think it might be useful if you were to elaborate on who the Big 5 are. All I can think of, is Godzilla, Mothra, King Ghidorah, Mechagodzilla, and Anguirus, if those ARE indeed the Big 5.

Also, decent match is decent.

Fixed!

Also, if it was only decent, how do you think i could improve?

[RamshackleRanger]

Very nice! I'm loving the way you've written Fugu up. Go canopy!

[GodzillaFreak99]

*looks at title* okay, looks like I'm in the right place this time
Name: Matt Bennett

Team name: M.I.A

Monsters:
Demagorg
Galbaros
Red King (Mah ace in the hole, as GF refers to him)

Description: A man who grew up without a father and lost his mother at the age of 13. He never had any friends, until he met a beautiful young woman with sky-blue hair. He and this woman grew very close, until tragedy struck, taking her from him. He now wanders the earth, now somewhat distant from other people) carrying with him nothing but his battlenizer, and a picture of she whom he cared for.

Physical Description: Average height, long white hair. wears a trench coat, a dark grey T-shirt, dark blue jeans, a black fedora, and a silver mask covering the top right-hand side of his face.

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"You made a mistake today, a big, big mistake. You killed my bird, Stevie Wonder."

[Beef Bigshot]

Gfreak your in, even if i dont like you right now


also, dark galberos has been picked, meaning you cant use galberos. Sorry, but i guess thats a punishment for screwing up my thread

[GodzillaFreak99]

BLAST! Gimme a moment to think up a replacement

[Demon Lord Gira]

What I mean by decent is, all the basic essentials are there... I just feel as if this needs some more polishing and details in each fight/chapter, and it would be gold. And why did you nerf my best guy?

[Beef Bigshot]

What I mean by decent is, all the basic essentials are there... I just feel as if this needs some more polishing and details in each fight/chapter, and it would be gold. And why did you nerf my best guy?

thanks fro your criticism. When i writing the match, it was on the same day as i posted it. Meaning i literally scanned through it and the posted it, so it makes sense its a bit rough. I will take more care next time. My goal in writing these is to have fun and avoid giant masterpieces that i have been writing for the KWC.

also you have Zetton soooooo........fire golza seemed like alot of overkill. Dont worry, i havent forgotten fire Golza and he is likely to appear sometime soon.....ish

EDIT: the two people have been chosen for the next match. Ill be on and off working on this for the week and it will hopfully be up for the weekend. Sadly this will be a semi-predictable match but ill try and make it a bit interesting. These first few matches are to set up the "tone" of the series or something

[GodzillaLord]

Name-Drillbot

Team name- B.A.B.I.E.S (Bad Ass Bird Infestation Extermination Squad)

Description-

Physical Description-Drillbot is almost all covered in metal armor, not much is known about his past or how he cam to be, it is often claimed that he is Reiblood Reincarnated yet their is no proof of this, though he is just as sadisitic as anyone Reiblood. He Stands 10' 6 and has a rather bulky form.

Monsters:

Monsarger (Main Monster)
Dinosaur Tank
Showa Mechagodzilla

[Biogoji]

Ummm yeah there's still no description and you're still using MG.

[Beef Bigshot]

Godzilla Lord......try again


EDIT: f**k it. As some may have noticed, i have removed the sign ups part on the title. Why you may ask, i have plenty of characters already and in order to preform a mild story arc, i dont need a bunch of people jumping in and complaining because i havent used them. You can still apply, ill simply put you "on the bench" and you wont be used for awhile

[Biogoji]

Sounds good dude.

[Beef Bigshot]

just a tiny update.

this match features earthron! Why, i like earthron. Also its a three way now......man that sounds weird since on character is a girl.......gah

[Beef Bigshot]

New match is up

congrats Biogoji and Flygon King and myself?

anywho, it was really fun to write and I thank everyone for you magnificent characters.

anywho, if anyone wants to know my direction for the next part, le clicke da spoila

Spoiler:

So instead of a big fight, im going to work on expanding MY universe a bit. The next part will feature ernest's charcater only and he will fight space pirates....whooo! But dont worry, what i have planned is awesome!

[ernesth100]

Thinking back on The Noob I'm worried death may befall me. But then again you wouldn't do that...I hope.

[Beef Bigshot]

Thinking back on The Noob I'm worried death may befall me. But then again you wouldn't do that...I hope.

i have 8 characters to work with, i wouldnt be to worried.....that is ntil i open the sign up again, then some people may die. Also enerest, with what i have planned, you will the be the most "pampered" character yet

[Biogoji]

Good job my friend except that I meant Re-Constructed Pandon from Ultraseven not King Pandon.

[Demon Lord Gira]

DO NOT MESS WITH ZETTON. HE WILL MESS YOU UP!

Telesdon got double ganged, though... poor kaiju.