TK*T(Toho Kingdom *Blank* Team) Disscussion

[ernesth100]

Wonder what Biogoji thinks...

[ernesth100]

Anyone think I should add a soundtrack?

[Biogoji]

Yes i agree with everyone else's opinions.

The main problem with the story is that it really is bare bones you need to add more. I think the the fiction team could of put up a better fight for example while Ultras are glass cannons Misaki could of put up a better fight.

[ernesth100]

....WHAT?!

[Biogoji]

Ok bad explanation is bad explanation. Anyway what i was trying to say is that the chapters are just too bare bone to be really good. Just try a bit harder next time.

[ernesth100]

I added two peices of music to this part. A theme for Mirablis and a theme for TKFT.

[ernesth100]

Anyone else wanna take a stab at the big finale?

[Dynomy84]

We're already near the finale? O_o That was quick.

I think this story is pretty good. It needs some slight improvements here and there, like maybe a few more details and such, but all in all, it's not half bad.

[ernesth100]

Well I have no idea what to do with the last part. can't seem to find the right words for the fight scenes or anything else.

[ernesth100]

YAY ITS DONE!!!

[ernesth100]

I've already planned spin-offs for every character...except Mirablis. But she is involved in every spin-off.

Schedual.

-Russell
-Emmanuel
-Dynomy
-The Scholar
-Ultraman Misaki


All getting stories!

Shinboi rights have expired so...um..I guess theres an open space.
Plus I'm not quite sure about Dynomy. So yea...things may not go so well in the next TKFT.

[ernesth100]

Some...Misaki, Dynomy, Russell, and obviously the Scholar are green lit.

[ernesth100]

You can do one for Emmanuel, but I expect each of these to be of decent quality. Take your time, and put effort into them, and you'll do fine.

and Emmanuel...he's green lit just need Shinboi and I'm golden TK Emmy Awards good!

[ernesth100]

Uh, okay then I won't. It's cool.

Edit: For the record Shinboi was a badass in the story.

[ernesth100]

I'm gonna make an Ultron style sequel to this.

[ernesth100]

Shortly after announcing a sequel I remembered many of the rights to the characters I had in TKFT have been taken away and one of the members of the TKAT who was an actual real member like me is rarely online anymore so I've decided to complete reboot/connect/make a sequel to all the franchises.


Mod: How can you all be memebers of TK? Your all just programs tangled in...codes...CODES.

"This Summer."

User 1: It's the end. The end of the Thread I started. It got locked.

User 2: No Thread lasts forever...especially if you don't read the rules before you make them.

"Experience a new evil rise and threaten the world of TK."

*Cue Shot's of List of Several Members Names with the Words /pb/ next to them*

*Amount of Users Quickly Lowering to Just 6*

*Cue Shot's of List of Several Members Names with the Words /pb/ next to them*

*Amount of Users Quickly Lowering to Just 6*

*6 Users in Shadow Arena Battle against Mod for TK*

User 3: He's using the codes to Tamper with our hits!

User 1: We might not win this.

Mod: You can't win this because unlike you.

*Cue shot of 1 of the 6 left banned*

Mod: THERE ARE. NO CODES. ON ME.

TKAT: AGE OF BANNING


Now I have somewhat changed the original title but not much. Simply the first bit from TK to TKAT. Now your probably wondering how this is a reboot and a sequel and bridging the universes of the two previous fan fictions all at once?

Well I will explain with asterisks!

*Sequel: It will recall events from both TKFT and TKAT.
*Reboot: It will contain no characters from the previous Fan TKT Stories.
*Connection: In this story the events of TKAT will have happened after TKFT. The TKFT will have seperated and the original TKAT will have been recently perma banned.

[ernesth100]

Well that's finished: Read if you will.
http://tohokingdom.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=18&t=21571

There will be a sequel. Afters several solo hero stories setting it up.

[Kubo]

Huh. This was nice, but leaked plot points to the upcoming Avengers movie?!?!

We'll just have to see.

[ernesth100]

So I have a couple of characters in my TKAT.

Gozi-Man with ability to scretch and reshape body.(Giving him a Spider-Man style story)

KaijuClaw- Man who can turn into Hulk sized monster kaiju and energize his claws for extreme damage.(Hulk Style story)

SoSo-Man with SuperSonic jet pack and gloves that allow him to launch lasers from his fingers(I also plan to add invisible armor).(Giving Him an Iron Man style story)

Golfzilla-Man with two flaming Golfclubs that can due extreme damage due to being made of an unknown incredibly dense but light material.(Thor style story)

JaegerM-Basically a guy in a human sized Jaeger suit that gives him Jaeger style abilities.(Captain America style story.)

SilentRoar-Basically "Marvel's Black Bolt". Planning to evolve his powers so he can harness the power of sound.(Wolverine type story)

Then we have the Athletic Quad heroes.

FootBrute-Basically the thing. Superstrength and durability.(Thing style story)

IceHitter-Has ice powers and can lift and create ice with her mind.(Invisible woman style story)

BasetBoy-Can fly...that's it and he's smart.(Giving him a Batman style story though despite him being based on Mr. Fantastic)

SoccerFan-SuperSpeed, based on the human torch. Can vibrate parts of his body like feet or fists to increase damage he does(Quicksilver/Human torch style story)


Then we got my villians
-TKAT

Mod Bot-Based on Ultron except it's just really strong can't really blast things...yet.
Komodo-Basically Abomination with a bit of Chitauri thrownin there for good measure.

-Athletic Quad

Professor DownFall-Basically Dr.Doom, I plan to distance him more and give him a jokey side.
FallBorgs- Basically Doombots.


So what do you guys think?

[Biogoji]

Hey Enresth I just read age of the banning and the side stories and it's pretty good. My favourite is Soso's and my least favourite is Gozi's story