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This last chapter has a lot going into it, but it will be somewhat brief too.

And that chapter for TKFA 4. Heh heh...
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I gotta catch up with this series... I haven't been on TK for a while...
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Dynomy84 wrote:I gotta catch up with this series... I haven't been on TK for a while...
The prodigal Dynomy has returned!! YAS!
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WHAT YEAR IS IT?!
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Dynomy84 wrote:WHAT YEAR IS IT?!
It is 2014 good sir.

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Biogoji wrote:
Dynomy84 wrote:WHAT YEAR IS IT?!
It is 2014 good sir.
No.... it's 2000 something something.

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GodzillavsJason95 wrote:
Biogoji wrote:
Dynomy84 wrote:WHAT YEAR IS IT?!
It is 2014 good sir.
No.... it's 2000 something something.
Good lord I've been out for decades...

But yeah. I gotta catch up with this stuff.
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All done! :)

I would ask you to read this final chapter before reading the new one in TKFA 4, but that's not up to me.

I hope you all enjoyed this project as much as I did. Here's to more shenanigans in the future!
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SpanishBulldog63 wrote:Oh man, I can't believe it's over...a nice, fitting epilogue to a fun addition of the TKFA series. Poor Tenko though...
Ah, she'll be fine.

Russell though, that guy may mean something to some of you...
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Poor Tenko... losing one you liked so much can do that to you...

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Okay so I got around to this and I'm just going to say this..... If you compare TKFA with the Dragon Age franchise then this would be the equivalent to Awakening.

Of course it doesn't mean this is bad, but on the contrary this was a wonderful expansion of the series. I consider this more of an expansion than an installment like the three main DA games. Why do I compare it to that game? Well basically once the main villain is killed, it immediately switches to an epilogue similar to what you did with no characters talking about what happened or any source of closure of the subjects and setting.

In what I'm trying to say is that like Awakening I loved the whole story except for the abrupt ending. Of course I still loved the epilogues like that game, but I felt the ending was a little disappointing for me. I felt that none of the characters beside mine got any closure. I would have loved to see Sal visiting Tenko in the hospital and discuss on how they're the only ones left and are sad. They discuss their future and you would think of the rest on why the two would separate.

Again I enjoyed Alex, Tenko and Mike's part and the epilogue, but I was wanting for more out of the ending and not in a good way.

Also, despite the abrupt, anti-climatic ending, I loved this story. I love the character interactions, story, the premise, humor, and suspense.

It would be ten if there was a little more added to this last chapter.

Anyway nice to see a story finished here. It's been a while and I'm glad its you who finished a story.

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I considered doing extended endings for each character, but I think at the time all I wanted was to get my ideas on paper and when I finished I uploaded the chapter without too much regard. Thank you for pointing it out though. It has been noted. :)
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OH my, sorry to dust off an old post but had to comment! Finally caught up on the TK stories with TK4ver and this one!

Liked the horror theme, with some Evil Dead thrown in! The first half story was great! Right up till after Jimmy D death it kind of...sped up faster than I had hoped lol didn't get the same vibe from the story like did at the beginning. Annnnd damnit, I wanted to see more of Tenko and Mortaci's relationship!! Oh well

I do liked the ending giving a connection to the greater universe! Overall, still good story and was a nice change of pace 8-)

P.S Damn, 2014 when this was published? I reeeeaaaally am behind on a loot of stories
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Did I have a character in this? If I did. I'm certain he's dead lol
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ernesth100 wrote:Did I have a character in this? If I did. I'm certain he's dead lol


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Oh cool. Well guess I best get reading up. Find out what happened to him. :lol:
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I know I'm WAAAAAAY late to this party, but I just wanted to say that I liked the whole "deal with the devil" aspect between Alex and Mike at the end there.
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