TKFA 5: Season of the Witch [Charcters in OP!]

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Only one more chapter left, huh? Well then, in that case... I hope for a last minute slaughter! Cleave through the remaining cast with a flaming sword of vengeance! My comfort over Lexie's death shall be the ranks of the slain that will join her! *mad laughter*

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I'm not sure that I am satisfied with the end product of this chapter. I may dive back in and do some surgery, mostly to rewrite Boba's ritual scene.

But the statement stands: One final chapter...
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Great job Kubo, I really enjoyed this and can't wait to see what surprises you have in store for us in the final chapter.

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Amazing! I loved this chapter and I can't wait to see the final chapter!

Also, you gave me Mordecai/Tenko paring! YES! You didn't disappoint me! :P

Anyways amazing job as usual.
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Made some edits to the previous chapter, which are all highlighted in bold.

There are a few changes that are significant that I really do think you should read about in order to keep up with the narrative. Most of them pertain to Boba's character and what really happens at the cabin.

I feel much more satisfied with the product and will continue onward with the next chapter and have it ready real soon. ;)
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He hadn’t noticed Abigail move behind him. “Cow,” she replied. “Or as she liked to call herself, Alexis.”
Hey, come on now, ghost! It wasn't enough just to behead her? Now you gotta start with the fat jokes too?

You know...

I'm staaaaaaarting to think this Abigail character isn't so nice.

S'a pretty strong hunch.

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Amazing edit you've done there my friend. I like the vast detail you went into with Boba in the cabin. Very well done.

I can't wait to see the final chapter. :)
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So this is it. Hope you all enjoyed. :)

Don't open till you read the story. It contains information about TKFA 6 that requires you to read the chapter in advance.
Spoiler:
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So if you can't figure it out, this story is far from over. Ahahaha oh man, the torment has only started. Can't wait for you all to see what's coming!
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NOOO!
Boba!

Well, looks like our resident black guy bit the bucket. RIP, you beautiful bastard.

Now that my venting is over, Holy crap. I wasn't expecting that. Flipping plot twists everywhere. Great chapter, Kubo!

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Ah. Knew this couldn't be the end.

You do not disappoint, KCubo.
SenseiTeriyakiV wrote:Well, looks like our resident black guy bit the bucket. RIP, you beautiful bastard.
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NSZ wrote:ACK

YOU TEASE
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It ain't fun if it's predictable! ;)
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And another bites the dust!

Only Five main characters are left. Who will bite the dust next?

I admit you got me with the last chapter trick you bastard. Anyway this is good because there's more to this for us all to enjoy. I can't wait to see more. :mrgreen:
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Good chapter, although the little Raccoon will live on in our hearts.

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Biogoji wrote:Good chapter, although the little Raccoon will live on in our hearts.

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He had a name in PG's elaborate character bio, but I killed the poor little bastard before he could Rocket Raccoon his way into our hearts.
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HOLY... We got more terror on the horizon, it seems.. NOT GOOD!
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Uh oh. Didn't see that one coming. :o
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Sorta changing gears in these following chapters...a little more campy in tone, a little more fun. Hope you all enjoy! :)
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Yes! I'm the Bruce Campbell of the group! :mrgreen:

Very fun chapter indeed. Of course the old hag could have given me more arrows.
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GodzillavsJason wrote:Yes! I'm the Bruce Campbell of the group! :mrgreen:
Naturally! :D Your character was the prime candidate for that reference.
Very fun chapter indeed. Of course the old hag could have given me more arrows.
Go cry in the corner, ya little baby.
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Good chapter dude.

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