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Alucard · Post by **Alucard** » Sat Dec 07, 2013 1:16 pm

I tried to bring the comedy back man, I tried to.

Kubo · Post by **Kubo** » Sat Dec 07, 2013 1:26 pm

kikomia wrote:I tried to bring the comedy back man, I tried to.

Yeah, I noticed. Got a few chuckles out of me. But I want more, more. MORE!!

Alucard · Post by **Alucard** » Sat Dec 07, 2013 1:28 pm

Geez, I'm trying.

I did 4 stories yesterday. Damn.

Kubo · Post by **Kubo** » Sat Dec 07, 2013 1:29 pm

kikomia wrote:Geez, I'm trying.

I did 4 stories yesterday. Damn.

Just giving you a hard time!

Don't listen to this old geezer.

Alucard · Post by **Alucard** » Sat Dec 07, 2013 2:03 pm

Another one done.

ernesth100 · Post by **ernesth100** » Sat Dec 07, 2013 2:53 pm

He's on fiyah!!!

Alucard · Post by **Alucard** » Sat Dec 07, 2013 2:55 pm

ernesth100 wrote:He's on fiyah!!!

Well, at least we know you can read. Or did you bring someone else to read it for you?

ernesth100 · Post by **ernesth100** » Sat Dec 07, 2013 3:06 pm

Yep there is. But your joking right?

Alucard · Post by **Alucard** » Sat Dec 07, 2013 3:06 pm

Of course I am.

ernesth100 · Post by **ernesth100** » Sat Dec 07, 2013 3:12 pm

Oh, good. Almost well I know I'm using this word incorrectly but that's cliche.

Alucard · Post by **Alucard** » Sun Dec 08, 2013 5:31 pm

Boom, new chapter.

RamshackleRanger · Post by **RamshackleRanger** » Sun Dec 08, 2013 6:24 pm

I enjoyed the first few chapters, but I have felt that lately its gone down hill. It feels like a random Tv series rather than writing. No buildup, characters dying left and right, and no emotion besides angered, confused and happy. The story feels broken and weird. When it was random "Scary" stories it was great, because the writing style suited it, but now its just random.

No offense meant here, just stating my opinion.

Alucard · Post by **Alucard** » Sun Dec 08, 2013 6:28 pm

Yeah, guess you're right...I have no idea what happened.

RamshackleRanger · Post by **RamshackleRanger** » Sun Dec 08, 2013 6:30 pm

It has a lot of potential, but with the agency and Alexander the great out of nowhere it got weird. The short scary stories were better, IMHO.

Alucard · Post by **Alucard** » Sun Dec 08, 2013 6:32 pm

Well, I wanted to put in the Foundation since the beggining, as the people who watch over. Like the Men in Black, or something, but somehow, it ended up with the Foundation as the main focus.

They keep anomalous things, it's what they do.

Kubo · Post by **Kubo** » Mon Dec 09, 2013 3:17 am

Quite funny, both new chapters. My sympathies go out to Lizardman. It wasn't his time... *sniff*

Alucard · Post by **Alucard** » Mon Dec 09, 2013 6:43 am

King Caesar wrote:Quite funny, both new chapters. My sympathies go out to Lizardman. It wasn't his time... *sniff*

At least he didn't get killed by the Penguins from Madagascar.

ernesth100 · Post by **ernesth100** » Mon Dec 09, 2013 8:53 am

Okay so I think I get it now its about demons possesing people.

Alucard · Post by **Alucard** » Mon Dec 09, 2013 8:54 am

ernesth100 wrote:Okay so I think I get it now its about demons possesing people.

I don't see how a cricket bat with a british accent is a demon, but alright.

ernesth100 · Post by **ernesth100** » Mon Dec 09, 2013 8:55 am

No your story is about demons right?

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